Caught in the Rain

Sentiments of a Grim Reaper

They say once the grim reaper sets his eyes on you, you see him everywhere.

Heavy rain battered upon the ground as if the gray skies were in mourning. The fresh smell of dirt and water stained the air, enveloping the whole city in a feeling of nostalgia. The city fell silent as if the words and laughter of all were washed away by the rain. Chaerin stood under the tattered awning of the 24-hour convenience store, which had gone brown with age, muttering a curse under her breath. Her black hair that she had straightened first thing in the morning was frizzy and tangled, and the horrid humidity was causing her light eyeliner to begin to bleed. A cold bottle of water paired with a packaged rice ball rolled inside the plastic bag that hung from her arm. It was already getting late, and the remaining colors of the gloomy sky seemed to bleed off of their canvas, revealing an impending darkness. 

She sighed and waited for yet another ten minutes, seeing if the rain would let up anytime soon. Of course, knowing her luck, it seemed to worsen with time. According to her phone, the bus had passed by five times already. The service would stop soon for the day. She muttered yet another curse as she wrapped the plastic bag tightly around her arm twice, positioning herself into a new stance. She had no choice but to make a run for the bus stop which was nowhere in sight. She raised her arms above her head in a feeble attempt to block out the rain and gave one last sigh.

Then someone stepped out of the convenience store from behind her and opened up a black umbrella. The man was cloaked from head to toe in raven black. He was dressed in almost a formal manner, as if for a funeral. A black fedora sat idly in his left hand. The man’s skin was pale like ivory, and his lips a soft shade of pink. His expression was grim, and his dark brown eyes seemed to harbor heartache. His black hair was short and neat, with a simple fringe stopping right above the bridge of his sharp nose. The man was breathtakingly beautiful, yet something about him seemed immensely sad. He seemed quite young, perhaps in his early twenties. He gazed at Chaerin in complete silence for a brief moment, before extending the umbrella above her head. He stepped closer to her, and gave her a small smile.

“Caught in the rain?” His voice was deep and rich, yet soft and airy at the same time. It was indulgent; music one could listen to on endless repeat.

A shiver ran up her spine as she stared at the man, unable to muster a word. Now that they were face to face, it was unmistakable. They had met before. And for some reason, looking at him made her heart ache.

They stood in silence, gazing at each other, and all that could be heard was the sound of rain.

 “I’m sorry—Have we met before?” she asked him awkwardly, despite already knowing the answer.

He shook his head slowly and dug into his pocket, producing a packaged rice ball. An exact replica of the one in Chaerin’s bag. “I just swung by because I was hungry. And saw you stranded in the rain, so thought I’d give you a hand.”

“I saw you at the café. About a week ago. You were there, I swear. You handed me napkins to clean up my coffee.”

He gazed at her intensely for a moment before breaking into a light laugh. “Perhaps.”

His answer was unsettling. She raised a brow and took a step backward. “Who are you?”

He shrugged. “A soul, like you.” He motioned towards the rain and then looked at his watch. “Were you going to accept my offer? I have a meeting to attend at nine.”

“Oh—y-yeah. Thank you.”

The two walked together in silence, both submerged in their own thoughts.

Complete darkness announced the arrival of night as the street lamps began to turn on, dimly lighting up the path ahead. The wet sidewalk seemed to shine, reflecting the warm light.  

“So, where are you headed?” He murmured quietly, breaking the silence.

“I have a bus to catch. Bus number 13. And you?”

His lips pursed tightly together in a deep frown. His brows knit together in what seemed to be a sudden bout of frustration. In reality, it was concern.

“Why not take another bus?”

She frowned. He had ignored her question and replied with one of his own. "Well, it's the only one that goes to my neighborhood. Especially at this hour. I'm thankful that it's still running..." She trailed off as she eyed her watch. 

"Bus 14," The man stated simply. 

"Bus 14...?" Chaerin repeated, a tinge of annoyance now present in her voice. 

"Yea. I recommend you take that one home. Although it's a bit of a walk home, it's... safer." 

Chaerin's heart skipped a beat. In that very moment, she was frightenednot by the stranger himself, but by his words. It was almost as if he were... implying something. But she couldn't wrap her head around it. A nervous chuckle sat at the tip of her tongue. 

Her phone lit up with a text message from the bus service. The bus would be arriving in 5 minutes. In short, she would miss it if she didn’t start running. She held up the phone for him to see.

"It's Bus 13. It's arriving soon. I'm sure Bus 14 is great and all, but I think it'll be better to just catch this one." 

A sigh caught in his throat as he shook his head ever so slightly. "Take Bus 14 home. It'll arrive soon and then you'll be on the way." 

She furrowed her brows in confusion. “Is there a reason you keep on telling me to ride Bus 14?” 

“I just have a..." there was a long pause. "A bad feeling," he finished. 

She shook her head. “Bus 14 would be the same thing as walking home. Look, I really appreciate your help—thank you—but I have to get going.” She stepped out from under the umbrella, only to be pulled back by a hand grabbing hers.  

“Take bus 14,” he urged, his voice more forceful than before.

Then he realized what he had done. The Grim Reaper had held hands with a human.

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sya_chocolate
#1
Chapter 13: Wow! Just wow! Its been so long for me commenting on aff. This one. I cannot help but to give my insight of this beautiful creation.
First of all, thank you so much for writing this. I usually give upvote only after I finished reading. But this, just from the first chapter, this deserve an early upvote. And speaking about it. Why this got so little upvotes?!
This is so beautiful. The melancholic feel, angst, sweetness all of it are perfect.
This is only 13 chapter but it doesn't feel too rushed or too short at all, the plot. By the end of this story, I was a crying mess!
The connection of the character which is the mystery aspect of this story is great. At firsf, I was like why did it happen to be her for the grim reaper to fall in love with. But no, after knowing the connection between them, it become more beautiful.
It is just my assumption but, his love, Yoongi love, not only the romance man and woman love but family love too. Maybe at first, it started with family love, the gratitude for Chaerin mother, Hyerin. But then, it change to the much deeper love.
The ending, I refuse to think it as heartbreaking but rather as relief. Love is something strong beyond deities power and control. It cannot be control by them. I was happy, for Chaerin die in the arm of her love. They might meet or might forever separate after death, afterlife. Yoongi, he already dead and his reason for becoming grim reaper is for Chaerin. So, another death as grim reaper by sleeping and eternal dream is the best for him. He suffered enough as grim reaper. Let him end it too.

Ok, now I remembered why I dont leave comment for such long time already. I WRITE TOO MUCH.
I guess, I might be your new fan? Your writing is amazing.
joon-seok14
#2
Chapter 13: This story was so amazing... there were so many heart-wrenching and touching moments ㅠㅠ
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read such a masterpiece ^o^
SuzakuYuki #3
Chapter 13: Amazing story~ Hope there would be a sequel author-nim~~~
Purple_Butterfly
#4
Chapter 13: Chapter 13: I loved this story! Your writing is amazing. It's fluid and has a good flow. The way you describe things is so good, I felt as if I was in the scenes or in the "skin" of the characters. Yoongi and Chaerin's relationship is passionate and touching. It made me want to fall in love (although I'd prefer not to fall in love with a Grim Reaper haha)! I really enjoyed the plot and how the mystery evolves and unfolds! I'll put the rest in the replies because it could be a spoiler to those who didn't read yet ;)
boricha
#5
Chapter 13: this story is so beautiful ohmygosh. im just so amazed at your ability to write an angsty story so well. thank you so much for writing this story and im so glad i stumbled upon it :)
CrystabelMyungsoo #6
Chapter 13: I cried reading this. Will there be sequel? Like them meeting after life
SemaBk21 #7
Chapter 14: This was so beautiful.. I don't have the words to describe how I feel.. Happy? Sad? I have no idea but my heart is doing strange things right now.
numberseven
#8
Chapter 14: Omg i cried buckets for this great job!!
_khabie #9
Chapter 5: I swear if this is a real K-drama....I'm gonna watch it coz it's soooooo interesting tho
miss_Belle
#10
Chapter 13: They will meet again in after life. Hope so...