Ready To Fall

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Victoria + 3 (twice) daughters + 1 younger sister (Sulli) + 1 meddling friend (Luna) + 1 adorable Llama (Amber) + 1 cocky princess (Krystal) divided by a busy work schedule and a shadowed past = Krytoria fanfiction. At least that's what I hope. ^_^

Foreword

Its not the falling that scares Victoria about love. Its easy to fall. Its the crash landing and the getting back up that terrifies her. She's a single mom raising three girls...four counting her teenage sister with a demanding job and zero time for a social life. When a company event throws her together with a certain cocky princess its all she can do to stick to her guns and make sure she keeps both feet planted on the ground.

 

This is something I wrote around one quote from a movie I saw recently. I'm deciding to give it a shot and let my much appreciated readers and subscribers tell me if I should scrap it or keep going. Thank you all, much love, <3 ^_^

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jinnyjjh #1
Chapter 10: *SOBS* T_T

I'm so happy reading another (rare) nicely-written KryToria fic T_T
I really miss seeing Vic & Krys laughing together side by side, whispering in each other's ears, Victoria taking care of Krystal like her own babie, and Krystal announcing to the world how much she wants to protect Victoria just like how she wants to protect Jessica.
I miss them so bad...

An epilogue would be nice, though it's all up to you :)
Aside from that; well done.
And thank you for writing this, for writing KryToria.

P.S.
I SQUEALLED when I read that you put JiMiChae as Vic's daughter and OMG I can't help but to grin wide as I read/imagine them as cute little bubbly children (especially Chaeyoung's "wild" antics & Mina's innocent-yet-deadly comments) XD
Thank you!
MistressOfAngst #2
I ended up reading this for the nth time and I swear I miss krytoria so much (even though lately I ship Luntoria more) but man I really love this theme/plot. Like the whole trying to gain her trust and also go through the challenge of winning over her kids. I swear Chaeyoung is the cutest! Alsbwkbwe your stories always make me happy!
MistressOfAngst #3
Chapter 10: Omg this story was seriously amazing and I love the character development with Vic and Krystal. I'm glad she didn't give up in the beginning and kept fighting I did die at in the beginning during the asking phone number scene lmao seriously loved this story. I swear all your stuff is great! I see that it isn't marked as complete so do you plan some more chapter(s) ;) ;) lol
MistressOfAngst #4
I stalked your stories before and even read them so today I was like hmm lemme check it out again and I saw this so I'm just mad at myself like HOW CAN I MISS THIS STORY? Imma start reading it now (or tomorrow)! So excited <3
Lea_himemiyalee #5
Chapter 10: That's it. I'm destroyed. I'm crying here. The feels are too much!!! I went fangirling so hard when Krystal tried to make breakfast that was so sweet and the way Victoria has that effect on her. I laughed so hard when Amber and Luna walked in and when she said 'did she pop your cherry?' That was awesome, Chaeyoung calling Krystal 'omma' was so meaningful, Krystal helping Saul with her English and telling her she was going to propose got me so exited. And when Vic found the ring I pictured Krystal's panic face. The way she said those things to Victoria and Vic finally letting it all out and accepting sharing her burdens with Krystal omg I can't even this is too perfect. I don't have words. It was so soo beautiful.
Lea_himemiyalee #6
Chapter 9: Wow that was good!! I like how both of them were nervous about it but calmed each other. Victoria took her time with Krystal as she said but at the same time gave in to her and she enjoyed it. I think this means a lot to both of them, it's something Krystal hadn't done before and Victoria didn't trust easily after what happened to her. The headboard part was a good detail too haha. After this I wonder what will happen, are they official now?. Can't wait to the next update!.
Lea_himemiyalee #7
Chapter 8: Waaaaaa omg omg omg!!! I can't wait to the second part of this. Amber is so lovable and Luna haha both of them like to be extra sometimes. The date was so romantic I liked it a lot and the kids being super cute with Krystal melt my heart. They just want to protect Victoria and that's sweet of them. Victoria knew what she was doing!! She acted as if she didn't notice but of course she knew what she was doing to poor Krystal also it's good she's admired finally things changed for her after meeting Krys, it seemed to be difficult to her after suffering before but she's slowly opening up and I think it'll be completely worth it. Thank you for updating~!!
Lea_himemiyalee #8
Chapter 7: THE FEELS THOOO. I can't even deal with it it kills me. I'm so sooo happy they made up and I'm also happy Victoria told Krystal why was she afraid. The 'I can promise I'll never leave" got me screaming of happiness. And with both teasing each other I was dying of laughter picturing Krystal's blushing face in my head. I wouldn't want to live with Amber either if that's what's heard every time haha. Krystal and Victoria's first real date! I'm so exited about it. They're slowly opening up to each other and I can tell Krystal is head over heels for Vic. I'd do the same as Victoria if my bed was as neat as Krystal's it's something that cannot be helped haha. I'm loving this so much my friend, thank you for updating!! :D
Lea_himemiyalee #9
Chapter 6: Yaaaah Victoria what are you doing. Poor Krystal she just wanted to have a good gesture with Vic but it's understandable, they didn't leave a note or something. I got really surprised when Luna slapped Victoria I didn't expect that but honestly she needed that. The girls already like Krystal, she should give her a chance and overcome her fears, I'm sure Krystal would help her. I can't wait to see what Victoria will do to talk with Krystal. Good update!! Can't wait for the next
Lea_himemiyalee #10
Chapter 5: I went fangirling through all chapter!. Krystal words are smooth~ and Victoria saying 'I do' made my day. I'm loving the kids more and more, Mina asking if they kissed I was like: hopefully soon you'll have a new mommy. Chaeyoung never fails to be an angel and the food fight, I didn't see that coming but that was so good! Sulli and Krystal are friends now, she's getting help from everyone!!. I can't wait to see what happens next ^^
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