◉Omelas◉ - Review & Proofread Shop | CLOSED |

Description

 
Omelas
Review | Proofread | Story Advice
 
Introduction
Welcome to the utopian city of omelas
 
Welcome! I haven't seen you around here in Omelas; perhaps you are a traveler? Come with me, AFF User, and we will explore the wonderful city of Omelas.

Welcome hence again to my shop! This is a one-person shop at the moment, but I might be hiring staff soon. I offer review & proofreading services for a mere price. But since you are new here, I will offer my services to you for free.

I have many experiences reviewing and proofreading such stories, hence you can trust me that I will give you the finest products I can write to you. Why don't you give this new shop a try?
Prices
Passing by the edge of the cold winter.
 

Reviews
• 10 karmas (Drabbles)
• 20 karmas (Oneshots / Twoshots)
• 30 karmas per story (Below 15 chapters)
• 50 karmas per story ( chapters)

Proofread
• 5 karmas per chapter

30 karmas to get your request prioritized. (Optional; mention in the comments below if you paid for it)
Rules
Not all who wander are lost
 
Of course, you need to follow and read all the rules before requesting!

• You must subscribe before requesting so that you can get updates from the shop.
Upvoting is optional, so if you are satisfied with my work, please upvote!
• I accept all genres / categories / AUs for proofreading & reviewing EXCEPT PWP, OmegaVerse, and MPreg..
• I have the right to reject your request. If I don't reply to your comment within 3 days, it means that I did not accept your request. Of course, I will give back to you the Karmas you paid. • Request to your heart's content only if you can afford to pay Karmas.
• Gift the Karmas to _Miss_Right_ after requesting. You'll get a 100% refund if there are miscommunications.
• Comment after requesting.
• Comment after receiving your request.
• Credit the ahop by putting the shop's banner & the link.
• Lastly, please be patient of your request.
• Secret Code is iluvgrapes.
Request Form
Please stay there for a little while...
 
Blacklist
How much sleepless nights do I have to wait?
 
Luckily for you, traveler, there's no one here yet. Failure to obey all the rules above will result in getting permanently blacklisted.

Foreword

Credit with this poster!

_Miss_Right_
Calling mykimnini!

Comments

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sunflowerpots
#1
I've requested and sent the required kp, looking forward to it! ^_^
MissMinew
#2
I requested, will send you the karma rn.
About the story, now I've forgotten if I said , but I just want to elaborate that they don't have . It's a lousy somewhere in chapter 3. ^-^
taemeilin_
#3
Chapter 6: Omg thank you for this review! I agree with a lot of your comments.
I've always been bad at writing oneshots because I always try to cram everything so its not too long~
Maybe I'll re-edit everything once again in the future~ (But I'm actually way too busy at this time)
Yes, I'd actually love the proofreading service because I actually don't proofread xD
Can I credit altogether with the proofreading when its done?
ApatheticTomato
#4
Omg should I request? I think it's fun to see what other reviewers think of my stories, especially since we're budaffies <3
GreenGardenPop
#5
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review...
I'm kind of surprised you still believe NPD is real when Jiyeon in this story has said there is no scientific evidence for the validity of narcissism. Anyway, bipolar disorder is 100% fraud. Mood is supposed to change and it is a normal brain function. David Healy exposes the whole scam of the bipolar fad in his great book, Mania: A Short History of Bipolar Disorder.
hollyeu
#6
Chapter 5: Ahh, I guess my grammar is a blackhole for everything XD Btw, thank you for reviewing! I'll credit you <3
(Also, I can't change the font size bcs my laptop is broken and I only use mobile for now. Hm, I don't mind if you want to proof read :3)
SapphireBlue91
#7
Hello... I've a question. I wonder, did you also do review for malay fanfic? Coz it's really hard to find malay review shop in AFF (╥_╥)
taemeilin_
#8
Hi! I've requested ^^
hollyeu
#9
Hi! I've just requested.
kpopcrown
#10
I've requested! c: