Chapter 3: Wow, that was REALLY intense xD Jiyeon and Suga's first meeting is really adorable. Suga is reeeal smooth (well, maybe a little rough since he was stumbling and all) with his words... I can see how he picks his girls up >_> He seemed like he really genuinely liked Jiyeon though, so now I'm wondering why he decided to cheat on her... I would really like to ask him, "What happened man?" Or maybe his acting is so good to the point that he can fool me lol. That being said, I was like "You go girl!" when Jiyeon rejected Suga. I mean, most of the time, a leopard never really changes its spots. Considering how Jiyeon was so heartbroken before, it's really not worth it giving him another chance and risking another heartbreak from Playboy Suga. Go Jiyeon! I believe you can emerge as a stronger person out of this \o/
I didn't know that Literature majors knew so many foreign languages though. Like they knew phrases all the way from Latin to Greek to Japanese (wow?).
This is really random, but I wish there are more strangers like Hoseok around haha. WE NEED TO SPREAD MORE JOY TO THE WORLDDD- Ahem. Jungkook though... "Everything that I’ve worked for, everything I love is falling apart.” Now I'm really really curious to see how things are like in Jungkook's perspective xD It'll be cool if you can write on that, maybe as a bonus chapter?
If Chapter 2 was a JungkookxJiyeon chapter, then this chapter is a SugaxJiyeon chapter. It elaborates more on their past relationship so that the sadness Jiyeon felt after the breakup feels more authentic. I look forward to see how the last chapter will turn out~

Chapter 2: I really enjoyed reading this chapter. It reveals a lot more intricate details of Jungkook and Jiyeon's relationship as well as the aftermath of the breakup. It also explains why the writing style is as complicated as it is in an elaborate manner. Although it may not be every reader's cup of tea, I guess one can consider it a 'secret code' between Jungkook and Jiyeon, which builds a wall between the others and themselves. (I'm just curious if S

Chapter 1: I think that your writing is really poetic, and it reflects well on Jiyeon's personal voice. But honestly, I think the writing style is a bit too flowery for an average reader to handle. When I first read this, I was shocked because I couldn't recognise majority of the words (...well, that also means I have to brush up on my vocabulary ^^'') and I think it's not really necessary to include most of the super difficult words, anyway. I understand that this story is meant to give off an eloquent and poetic-ish feel, but there are plenty of ways to go about doing so without spamming too many incomprehensible words. It's okay to be flowery to a certain extent; however, I believe a more effective way to be eloquent is by using unique sentence structures and poetic devices at the appropriate places. That's just my opinion as a reader though!
I'm also curious about how Jungkook and Jiyeon suddenly became really close because when they first met, they only introduced themselves and didn't say much. I suppose it's due to the fact that both of them are Literature majors, but it'll be better if you can present that in a clearer manner in order to avoid confusion.
Other than that, I find the mini argument between the two Literature majors at the end really amusing. Jiyeon's emotions are vividly described and I can really feel the intense hurt that she was going through. Good job! I look forward to the next chapter. :)

(Oh, and I can make you a poster, if you don't mind! We'll have to discuss about the details again, though. Here's an example of a poster I had made: http://i882.photobucket.com/albums/ac22/azelinee/NM3dfvh_zps7uriat7i.jpg)

Chapter 1: Hey, your writing is really good :D