When Things Fall Apart

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Things were so perfect in the beginning. All the laughs, jokes, smiles, and kisses, it all felt so miraculous. Being able to be wrapped in your arms and feeling your soft, amazing kisses was everything I could ever wish for. It all seemed so complete at the time…

Although, things started to fall, and believe me when I say, that they were falling fast, a little too fast.

All those late nights, unanswered calls, and canceled dates, those nights where I’d be left alone, in my quiet apartment just wishing you’d be here to comfort me. The constant fighting and arguing over the stupidest things imaginable, they all led to a downfall... the worst thing that could ever happen to a couple.

Sadly, it had to happen to us. 

Foreword

Okay, so it's my first fic in a long time and this time it's a oneshot [:

I've been obsessed with 'Troublemaker' lately. 

 

So... here ya go~

 

ENJOY~

 

oh and a big thank you to 1995dark from Dreamer Request Shop for my beautiful poster! [:

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ilovejunhong #1
Chapter 2: SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Heyinpiniteu #2
Chapter 2: This story definitely needs a sequel !
emo_hyuga15
#3
OMG I'M JUST CRYING RIGHT NOW.
SEQUEEEEEELLL!!!!!
:D
SapphireBlueHearts
#4
SEQUEEEEEEEL!! :"""""""""""<
Indubutably
#5
I'm going to sit here and wait for a sequel. LOL D:< Seungieee</3
teayeon
#6
I was reading the first chapter and in my mind I was like "No no no! Please don't be over yet!" Then I realized that this was a two-shot.. You are a really good writer. I hope to read more stories from you :D
iheartbeast
#7
Please update! <3
nielsgurl859
#8
u should a sequel
k-pop_obssession
#9
Pls. tell me if there would be a sequel..Like a time skip or something because I really love your story and even cried..(I blame you for makeing my pillow wet..jk)<br />
Anyway love ur story :)D
SpeechofSilence
#10
Wow, haha, I'm crying. :'( I was looking for something sad to read, and I encountered your fic. This is wonderful. I like the plot too. It's something that a lot of couples experience. The arguing, the fighting... but perhaps that is also what makes the couple stronger, or break apart. <br />
<br />
Hyunseung was rather neglectful. If ________ was everything to him, why did he go out with other women? It is, after all, his fault. _______ made the right decision to leave for her dreams. What guarantees that their love will continue to survive? This ending is really suitable and nice, instead of somehow Hyunseung miraculously discovering what happened and runs to the airport. Hopefully, _______ will return though. <br />
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Great story. :)