Apple of My Eye

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     "If looks could kill, he would have already been dead. Literally." Mark muttered as he glared at his target, a million-dollar business owner, who who sat surrounded by many girls in a VIP booth at U29, Underburrow29, the bar for all the rich and powerful people where one can only enter with an invite. The land, Ground Zero as people now call it, is almost uninhabitable anymore, since the ozone layer has been destroyed so terribly that the land has been burnt down and all that was left were charred remains of whatever that had been there.. In fact since year 2057, everything has been shifted and built underground.

 

 

I didn't want to reveal that much so that you have something to look forward to. xD

Foreword

I actually wrote this for a short school essay. But im posting it here because i want to hear some really constructive feedbacks on how i should improve my essay. Also the essay was about being set in a futuristic and dystopian setting. Hope you guys will enjoy it. Also thank you in advance for reading this, and many hugs and kisses for those who subscribe and comment (and maybe upvote). Thank you so much!

Also the first version is not a lovey-dovey Markson story, and i apologise in advance for disappointing those people who had wanted to read that. But just read that one chapter, i assure you there's a hint of Markson ;). But i hope you will give this story a shot. :)

Also to you lovely readers, could you suggest a title for this story? Thank you so much!!

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shanamj #1
Chapter 3: I like it. I really hope it becomes a story.
Lunaywolf #2
Chapter 2: That Markson story was lovely...
Nachtice #3
Chapter 3: I'm intrigued by your short introduction! I hope you make it into a story! :)
Seoulqueenka #4
Chapter 2: I'll always (or almost always) want to see boyfriend!Markson!!!!!!! This was so adorable!!!!!!! Thank you author!!!!!!!!
Nachtice #5
Chapter 2: That, was AWESOME. Damn. Jackson makes an amazing boyfriend, and Mark was on point. Very well written!
Nachtice #6
Chapter 1: Love the Markson friendship and I think it would be cool to read the other version as well.

That was really cool. When I read the word dystopia I kind of think "oh boy, here we go again" but what ever I thought this story was going to be it certainly wasn't that. I am glad I read this story! I like it and if you so desired I think you could make a really long really captivating story but that's probably for another time.

A place for elaboration: Does Mark have healing abilities? Otherwise a human being would need stitches after having an incision made in them, I would also imagine that to be rather painful and injuries close to the head tend to bleed a lot. To say the least, a tissue would normally not suffice.

Thank you for posting and sharing this story with us authornim!
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