Scattered Apart

Description

It was all white, she was blinded by the lights. Where was she? Byul kept rubbing her eyes, but she couldn't quite make out where she was. The room was so whit- wait. She was in a room. A room with four walls and a white chair. On the wall there was was a picture of the sky with a white frame and white skies and a white door with a white handle. A door. She quickly rushed over to the door and tried to open it. It was locked. Her eyes looked over the room again and everything was white, except the blue sky in the painting on the wall. Looking down on herself and she discovered white clothes. Where was she? Why couldn't she remember where she was? Wait... she couldn't remember a single thing. Everything that came to her mind was her name. Moon Byul-yi. But she couldn't remember anything else. How she got here, where she is from, what she does for a living, where she lives, nothing. She couldn't remember a single thing.

 

 

Wait.

 

That would be a lie.

She could remember something. Something else.

She remembered another name. Just a name, nothing to connect it to, but it was a name.

Solar.

Foreword

My second fanfiction! This will be very short, but I hope you are as excited as I am! And of course it is Moonsun, Moonsun is the reason I'm alive~  

 

//// I HAVE STARTED EDITING THIS AKA. PUTTING IT THROUGH WORD'S CHECK CORRECTER THING AND BREIFLY READING OVER IT CAUSE AINT NOBODY GOT TIME TO READ THROUGH YOUR OWN FIC (mostly because i either get bored or feel so embarrased i want to delete it soooo ya how do you put up with these stories yall are crazy)

EDITED UP TO: CHAPTER 1

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Rmrocks #1
Chapter 5: Usually I don't like angst and I don't want to read it. But I did for this. And I teared up. But kinda liked the ending. Since they still manage to get together. It's just sad. Really really sad though. I feel bad for wheein and hwasa.
joody107 #2
Chapter 5: Wow. That was something I was not prepared for. I really thought Solar was gonna accept Taemin's feelings omg if she did. This was one big rollercoaster of emotions
yunita_aulia
#3
I just finished reading this masterpiece. It's so good! Angst is always my cup of tea and my plate of pasta. Btw i want to share my opinion about this great story. It's awesome, indeed. But maybe it would be more 'reasonable' or 'real' if you left it just without the epilogue. Because... the epilogue part is kinda a turn off. I mean it's great, but it would be more 'hurt' and heart clenching if you left it in 'reality' part. Hehe just sharing my opinion tho. Thank you for this awesome peace!
Radish_nyoom #4
I hate you so much for making me feel, author-nim. You really have a talent, No piece of literary ever made me this sad in my 16 years of living. Thank you.
Joezette
#5
Chapter 5: It's been a long time since i cried for a fic but this one... wow i cried for two chapters straight!
Good job author-nim!
LeeChinMae
#6
Chapter 5: *Yongsun voice* "Tears"

I am crying and was really captivated by your angsty fic. Thank you for making me a sad mess at 3 AM.
I'm looking forward to your next fics. :D
ramyeon88
#7
Chapter 5: Thank you so much
Awesome epilogue
jcxii_ #8
Chapter 5: damn it! I hate you author-nin for making me cry at midnight but that was hell of a story. I started to get nervous that Solar will accept Taemin's love buf hopefully she didn't.Yey! I may sound crazy and a lunatic but this story made me cry so much wishing that my mother won't come in my room to check me up. Thank you author-nim for this story :)) I'll cherish and remember this forever. I might reread this again but too much sadness bruh. Thank you again and hwaiting author!