Nine

Chasing Who
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[CONTENTID2]She felt really confused tonight, she had many things to think about, if only

 she could drop all of these weights. 
She could.
There was one place she could go to, and one thing she could do.
It's been a while, and maybe she forgot about how long it has been, she

 hasn't been feeling it for a while.
Today it struck her like lightning. 
She got dressed, not there's anything to get dressed for, she knew he'll strip her off 

her clothes the second he knows why she's there.
She told her parents she was going to buy stuff that she has been

 saving for and that she might get late.
Rachel heart pounded, yes there was nothing else, this could end her suffering. 
But only for a short period of time unfortunately. 

He was kind of surprised when he opened the door, still he welcomed her, first

 they sat talking then she couldn't wait anymore.
"I need to get my mind off this " She said as she slided

 her finger down his arm.
"Really? Rachel it has been a while, you sure you want to do

 this now?" He asked grinning. 
"I can tell you honestly, I've never been sure about anything in my life, but

 I need to do this" She shrugged.
"I understand you're ready" He stared at her and she nodded carelessly

 before she took off her shirt.
He took her in his arms, in a warmth she hasn't felt
 for a really long time, while their
 heated bodies were

 moving with each other in synch, she forgot how good this felt.
This felt so good, for some reason it was better than the last time

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Psychokyu
#1
Chapter 17: Ohmygod i cant believe im crying ;-----; the part when she said yoongi was not real omg that hits me real hard. But wait so he actually came because her mother asked him to or he was "real" before she said he wasnt real im still a bit confused. But this story is amazing omfg good job authornim
kaimykai
#2
Chapter 17: Authornim!!! i love your story , great job , the last 5 chapters were amazing . thank you
namluxia
#3
Chapter 17: Wow. You've unexpectedly inspire me to write something about character with mental problem.
Anyway, you've did a great job writing this.
When the last line "You're to young to stop/give up" it reminds me of the Intro:Nevermind. I automatically thought that the nxt chpter would be that Yoongi composed a song (Intro: Nevermind) dedicated to Rachel..but, it's already the author's note. ::>_<::
Nevertheless, i had a great time reading your fanfict.
Don't stop writing coz it's only get better ↖(^ω^)↗
Hwaiting author-nim~~
aoii-ojosama44
#4
ah. its ok.
you did your best.
aoii-ojosama44
#5
did you get the cover for your story?
Dohyeonju
#6
Chapter 2: dear, I really want to read your story but it's not well-organized. Some of the parts are hide behinds the layout :(
aoii-ojosama44
#7
Chapter 8: YAY, more update authornim!!
fadhilah
#8
the plot sounds good, interesting even. Yoongi that she talk to isn't the real one right? She developed 'Yoongi' due to her state of not trusting anyone. can you adjust the paragraph a bit, so that we don't have to scroll to the left too much. thanks and nice story!
aoii-ojosama44
#9
Chapter 7: Thanks authornim!
aoii-ojosama44
#10
plz update soon T_T