Title: (4/5)
It's really eye catching and definately related to the story! Only that it's abit too common.

Description/Foreward: (7/10)
The plot was well explained and also the characters in the fic.

Plot: (8/10)
It's really an outstanding plot having someone to live with you and it's a guy ^_^ Also it's a great way to use the parents as why Junhyung left.

Poster: (4/5)
The poster is really nice and it definately matches with the story. It's not too dark and it also shows the emotions of the story

Chapter Titles: (-/15)
Since this is a oneshot I will be removing this part of the total marks.

Grammer/Spelling: (16/20)
There are only a few spelling and grammer errors. Such as the word 'nd' should be 'and'

Total enjoyment: (13/15)
Honestly I really enjoyed your fic! It's not too common or anything.

Total: (52/65)
Your oneshot is really good! And also do improve in your spelling and grammers (: