*NOT AN UPDATE

Hi, everyone! Sorry to inform you all that this is not an update. I have a lot of prompts lined up to become the next installment, but I can't for the life of me finish any one of them. I thought that maybe if I wrote down some of the ideas rolling around in my head, you guys could help me to decide which one I should work on first?

Here are the prompts:

1) sunyoung didn’t really know what to think when she started noticing the way the mysterious girl in her english class would stare a bit too unabashedly at her from across the room. (tell me who you want to feature!)

2) if soojung had known beforehand how complicated her relationship with sunyoung would get... well, she'd still be with her because frankly, she quite liked being with the older girl. (tell me who you want to feature!)

3) “you just at this blind dating thing so you’re taking it out on me,” amber says grumpily.

“maybe if you introduced me to someone I actually had things in common with, I wouldn’t so much!” soojung retorts. (ft. amber, jonghyun as her bffs)

Or more broader topics:

4) soojung gets jealously jealous. (ft. jinki)

5) how soojung and sunyoung first met

I would really appreciate it if you guys gave me your feedback on this so that I can get back to writing as soon as possible! Thanks and have a wonderful day:)

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IncognitoShark #1 Jun 5, 2018 10:41:58

Chapter 4: So little Lunstal

Lunchbreak it is! Brace yourself for part 2 comments:
Jinki is onto you, Luna. Even before you fully realise it yourself probably.
(Also, "Secret Ad Mirror", nice touch :') Gotta love that autocorrect *cough*)
When even bringing up the incident doesn't get him off your back, you know it's bad.
Again with the eyecontact. It's like their eyes are magnets or sth I LOVE IT!
Lol, Krystal really does seem like a student who wouldn't get her books ready & be bored like all the time. (Then again, it is English class so it probably is boring af to her)
Luna, you nerd. Attention immediaely grabbed by your teacher tssk.

REARRANGING THE BOOKS NERD^2 (I love me the nerds. Don't get me wrong)
vnuewfnweignaerigaeil FInally they meet face to face DUN DUNDUN my heart is pouding not gonna lie. I am too invested in this *heavy breathing*
"Omg, omg, omg" my go-to chant in every situation.
Oh God, they're both so awkward. It's both cringey and so so satisfying at the same time.
"Yeah, I can tell. You get frazzled a lot, don't you?" Of course YOU'D know, Soojung. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
"CAN I" "YES?" SHE WAS TOTALLY EXPECTING STH ELSE and my heart cannot take it asdfghjkl
God, Krystal really isn't used to socialising is she lol. But good job on srtetching out the convo I guess? (AHMAGAD COUPLE SHIRTS!)
Noooooo *darth vader voice* Don't ruin the moment, Minho :K nfejwfnw;o (On the other hand YES! Cause now more awkward meetings are needed hah!)
Oooh, Luna wanting to be secretive. That's when you know there's more to it! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

asdfghjkl; I loved, loved, loved this. Thank you for writing some Lunstal. Such an underrated ship. I love their dynamic ^^
♥

(Sorry, I have written you 2 books :x Also, back to work now *sigh*)

IncognitoShark #2 Jun 5, 2018 06:52:15

Chapter 3: Soooo, I have to admit that after all this time I had kind of forgotten about this story :x
So, I decided to read part 1 again as well. The comment that will follow thus includes both hah!
(I loved both chapters so much though! I was seriously almost late @work because I was too absorbed oops :'))
Okay, bear with me. I am skimming over the story again to write down my thoughts (Which will be a mess cause that's jsut who I am)

Firstly, just Sunyoung noticing Soojung staring at her like asdfghjkl. I'd be freaked out for sure omg. Imagine o.o
I love how you describe the both of them as polar opposites (Which is, let's face it, true :') ). It just makes everything so much more... *squeeeessss* you know ^^
Omg Jinri! I am so dead XD Poor Jinki ('Poor'? Who are we kidding am I right?) I wonder if Krystal said anything to her friend about it, knowing Onew is Luna's friend. Then again, maybe she didn't have that fascination with Luna jsut yet then.
My heart stops everytime their eyes meet. Not gonna lie. Girl, what are you doing to me in only 2 paragraphs :K
Lol, Minho! I get it though. Waiting in line is the worst. (BUT Luna >>>>> food so...)
I love how Luna is making such a big deal out of it & telling all her friends haha. I'd probably just keep it to myself liek "eh, it's probably nothing". But it's adorable ♥ Obvs, it's jsut because Luna is secretly crushing on her as well. She's nervous poor bae.
ALSO, can I just say; the way you write Key is so spot on! I died several times because I could just IMAGINE him saying/doing the things you write. Amazing.
Onew is never gonna hear the end of that. I'm sure Jinri's s are burned into his mind.
Aaah, they're all such trolls (as I imagine them being in real a well when they're all together, honestly).
Don't worry Luna. You're definitely her type. Opposites attract, right?
POPSICLE God Key... I am dying here.
Talking to a girl randomly is scary though. I wouldn't be brave enough :') (I'm just awkward and not smooth at all basically SAVE ME)
YAYAYA! Don't do this! :K I have to know what Jungli were doing ;_; AUTHOR WHY! (I get why. It's okay. I just like being dramatic)
And there's the seed. Now that it's planted in her mind, Luna won't be able to get it out hah.
Hahaha, I totally expected her to get detention and meet Krystal there. But I am guessing it's poor Luna's first offense indeed.
Her schoollife just got a whole lot more interesting :')

Aaah, I wanted to include part 2 in my comment as well but I have to start working now :( I'll try to get to it tonight.
Either way, I really enjoyed both parts so much!! dnweifnijiwa. I can't believe I am about to be one of those obnoxious readers but... pelase update lol. (Take your time though. I am willing to wait for art :3)
Thank you for writing ♥ (And sorry for the wordbarf. I can't read over it right now so it's probably unreadable and full of mistakes o.o)

geuranimalhe #3 May 29, 2018 11:33:14

Chapter 1: That was so cute.. But I kinda think Soojung weirdness is cute XD

-electrify #4 May 29, 2018 09:09:52

Chapter 4: i just found this story today and i must say, i already love it so much ㅠㅠ
i was about to comment asking if you'll continue the story but i'm so happy you still are writing it ahhh
please never discontinue this cute masterpiece ♡

justlieforme #5 Aug 6, 2017 09:28:04

Chapter 3: Omfg this is so great I love it so so much. Please continue to write more about these two! You do it so well!!!! The polar opposite thing with them just melts my heart :')

MistressOfAngst #6 Aug 1, 2017 23:06:44

Chapter 3: Omg this is SOOOO GOOOD! You've got me so curious on what Sulli and Krys were doing and the teasing Jinki scene cracked me up so hard lol Keep up the good work, so excited to see what's going to happen in the future :)

TofuScribbles #7 Jul 1, 2017 22:29:56

Chapter 3: YESSSHHH YOURE BACK!!!!
I love it already. Sunyoung and her gang are hillarious. I love how you include f(x) and shinee~ it's been forever

What did jinri and soojung do? I hope they're not making out or something. Judging on minho reaction, it must be something shocking. Lol
I kinda like the idea of soojung likes sunyoung first.
And i wonder why jinri flashed jinki in the first place? Lol

Please update soon~

IncognitoShark #8 Jul 1, 2017 22:16:29

Chapter 3: Ooh I really liked this chapter! I really like the way you wrote all the character ^^ I can really imagine them :D very curious as to what Minho saw & how Lunstal will make "first contact" ghihi. I love how you wrote Key's character.
Thank you for writing! <3

justlieforme #9 Jan 1, 2016 12:45:11

Chapter 2: I really liked the first chap and I really hope you update soon!! I like the idea about how they first met. Maybe you could elaborate on that like how they realized they liked each other as more than just friends? And how they dealt with it?

Emmale77 #10 Dec 13, 2015 21:24:53

Chapter 2: Cute story! Any plot is cool! Thabks.