Swing

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Things get better when you least expect them to.

 

 

 

 

AN: hi everyone! Ehm this is the first story I have the courage to post and the first I actually managed to finish, so yeah, I am a bit self-conscious about it haha

anyway, I hope you like it and leave comments on your thoughts about the story: if you liked it, if you didn't like it, things I could improve etc..

and if you don't want to it's fine too hehe just thanks for reading it :)

elisa

 

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unintented #1
Chapter 1: Oh sweet and awkward Joonmyunnie. ♡ Loving it already!!
Eaglestorm17 #2
Chapter 2: OMG I love this! It's really clever and of course SuChen lol. Keep it up!!
Moneylovefashionfame #3
Chapter 2: Hahaha I'm glad you decided to continue! I loved the way you ended it "you left your coat on the hanger". I just have a few things to point out, not bad, just some small adjustments that will make this story even better, if you'd like that?
shdw-fox #4
Chapter 2: Just let Kris freeze to death for pretending to be all mysterious -.-
You updated!♡♡♡♡
shdw-fox #5
Chapter 1: Jongdae is the new babysitter?Aww it will probably be cute ^///^
Oh,I like the way you write *thumbs up* *shoot fireworks* *hits a bus* *died*
Moneylovefashionfame #6
Chapter 1: Is that it? I feel like there should be more. Like, them actually meeting and Jongdae having a crazy way of handling Junmyeon's kids with ease and then maybe some growing feelings…maybe a bit of angst (maybe Jumyeon's afriad of what the kids would think about him dating the baby-sitter) .
This is the start of a really good story, and your writing is good, it's just a bit short and ends awkwardly. I hope you decide to lengthen it, but if not, that's okay.

Oh, by the way, I love Sehun and Jongin in this, it's too adorable.
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