(94) Curtain Call of Our Flowers

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Curtain Call of Our Flowers

 

› Title [ 9.5/10 ]

I really like this title and I would accuse it of being misleading but that’s just me because I thought you were referring to geishas preparing for a performance or something. Upon reading the story though, I realised that you were referring to Good Goodbye’s curtain call. xD Wow, Saff, wow. But in a way, the title seems to only belong to Taeyeon. I would have liked it more if it had a bit of a Sooyeon/Sunshine reference there too~ Definitely an original title though, I’ll admit. :D

 

› Description and Foreword [ 10/10 ]

I had never heard of Hanahaki Byou before coming across your story so when I first learned about it upon reading your foreword, I was definitely intrigued. Pretty much everything from the background to the overall layout to the content were all just so pretty – how could I not mistake it for geisha!AU lolol – so well done for that~

 

› Plot [ 14/15 ]

Once again, you came up with a story so original that I literally cannot even. There were times however, that I felt like the plot wasn’t strongly built because how could she only contract the disease after answering questions in a drunken state? :c (Like I know that it’s because she only admitted it to herself now but still, ugh! Taengoo, why?! >///<) The beginning of the story just flew by too fast nonetheless, it was all extremely interesting and I was seriously feeling the tension as Taeyeon approached Sooyeon’s bedroom. You’ve probably noticed from my own story

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prod_GLEE
#1
Chapter 37: huhu. thank you for all the helpful tips!~
Caniwi
#2
Chapter 14: Wow how you reviewed this story made me want to read it SO bad! And thank you so much because it's one of the best psychological fics I have ever found! ;-;
OnceUponAnEXO
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Caniwi
#4
This is really interesting, I always like checking people's point of view of a story. Since you always make such amazing stories I'm sure I will learn a thing or two from this :)!
exosehunluv1
#5
Chapter 3: i like the way you describe the character development. i really see the points you're making.
TeaMinT
#6
That was a good read. Come to think of it, I've never, ever requested for a review before. Mostly because I have too many ongoing fics and I didn't really have the time to look for a shop. I would, however, love to request for one in order to improve my language skills (English isn't my first language, even though some people might not be able to tell.) I'll probably do that some day. Some day.
OnceUponAnEXO
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mistressdean
#8
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Which I think "adoring" is a strange word choice here, but anyhow, I enjoyed reading them and I look forward to more :)