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"Call in the hounds"
cause now, this is war.
 It was a procession of choking agony, moving at a crawling pace as a parade of flat monochrome. It was as if the world had been put on pause and had simply allowed the relentless onslaught of downpouring rain to simply bleed away all of the color and vibrance from the world as a whole. Gam Jinuk stood somberly, one of many officers in uniform present at the funeral for one of their own. The turn out was large, he had expected nothing less really, even if Joohyuk hadn’t been so exceptionally well liked by both his colleagues and even a number of the criminals on the street, Jinuk would have expected that most would be attempting to kiss by attending the funeral for their resident Chief of Police’s own son-in-law.

The rain only added to the mood, the sky seeming to crack open and weep in agreement to the broken and muffled sobs that he could hear his beloved daughter making not even three feet away from him. His eyes scanned over the large and swaying collective canopy of black umbrellas of those present, and did a double take as his gaze rode over the faces in the back, briefly making eye contact with a face he had not been expecting to see present.

Oh Sangjoong had not been one of the detectives with whom he would have pegged to have decided to show up. Quite the contrary, Sangjoong and Joohyuk had actually heads rather regularly and their last exchange had been anything but civil or pleasant.

He acknowledged the curt and shallow inclination of the other man’s head, before the voice of the reverend carried over the rain and otherwise hushed gathering of people in the graveyard. The funeral itself had already been completed, this was simply the burial.

Try as he may, Jinuk couldn’t seem to keep focused on the solemn and concise words being spoken, mentions of “beloved husband” and “a true loss for the city” seemed to swell and pass over him like waves rushing to break on their approach to the shore. All he had eyes for at the moment was his three year old grandson, still too young to fully grasp the situation as the little boy's head swiveled around in confusion.

It was only when they began lowering Joohyuk's coffin into the ground that the little boy began to show any amount of distress. Jinuk, along with several onlookers from the first few rows of mourners, turned their attention on the little boy who was now desperately clutching and tugging on the long sleeve of his mother's black trench coat. 


"Mommy! Mommy why are they putting Daddy down there?!" the boy's tugging became more insistent as he continued, "Daddy still needs to fight the bad guys! He told me so! Stop them, they can't do this to daddy!"

Jinuk watched as what little composure that remained with his daughter crumbled, and he was by what remained of his family's side before her knees even hit the soaked ground. Even as his mother collapsed next to him, little Jaehwan continued his protests, finally turning to appeal to his grandfather, fat tears rolling down his chubby little cheeks. Jinuk gently helped his daughter back to her feet, allowing her to lean heavily against him. He could feel his chest seemingly tighten as his grandson began to wail, tiny little fists clutching tightly to the material of his uniform and refusing to look in the direction where his father's remains had been lowered into the ground.

The first volley of shots that set off the beginning of the three volley salute caused his grandson to violently flinch, his loud wails quieting into soft, hiccupping whimpers. The second round was followed immediately by the stuttering sob from his daughter, Minji. It was soft, but as he strained his hearing, he realized she was repeating a simple phrase over and over again.

"Please, please no."
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The official burial ended after Joohyuk's coffin was fully recovered with the freshly tilled soil, leaving a fresh grave marked by the immaculate and brand new marble headstone. Jinuk had exchanged respectful nods towards several of the prominent individuals present, sighing gruffly when he noted Inspector Kim Taehyun lingering hesitantly a small distance away from where the three generations of Gams remained, even after people had begun to trickle out of the cemetary, almost as if too afraid to come and join them in what was just as painful of a loss.

Jinuk had not expected one of the lingering individuals to be none other than the force's resident mad dog, Oh Sangjoong. There was something dark sparking in the other male's eyes as he quietly stood and looked on at the fresh grave, and for the first time Jinuk was not offput in the slightest by it. On the contrary, he reveled in it, welcomed and recognized the sensation building within him for what it was. 

The burning desire for vengeance.

Joohyuk would be avenged, and this murderer was going to pay for their crimes. He would make sure of it.

   
 
AUTHOR NOTE : I , I'm sorry guys. Here's a lame teaser to try to appease how long it took me to make two reviews. LOL.
In other news, I seem to only ever write anything of decent substance after the hour of 1am for whatever reason. Sorry if this makes even less sense than usual. ; ;
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Soonyangel
#1
Chapter 8: I was on my phone when I read that and didn't have the possibility to comment until now, woow, sorry~
This teaser is great ! The two detectives are just so intriguing, their relationship is really interesting to see and how both changed with the case. Let me confess, I just adore Sangjoong, his character is just awesome even with only 2 teasers.
The Mongrel Squad is coming, dayum ! I can't wait to see all that. Good luck Ash, I can't wait to read more !
kanqwu
#2
Chapter 8: ugh another really good teaser
seriously these detectives are already such wonderful characters. i could honestly watch an entire drama just with these guys here and their situation. the hype is building every time you update and i think i'll cling to this fic for the entirety of its existence.
ugh seriously your fics are always just super stellar ash.
jaejoongjaejae #3
Chapter 6: Omg thank you for the review!
Tbh I had a tough time figuring out how to make my character as unique as possible. Then my friend told me about this drama, Kill Me Heal Me and I suddenly thought about making my character have MPD. It was difficult making things work but I'm glad you like him! I honestly think the way he was captured was a tad ridiculous and stupid cause of that freaking neighbour of his XD
During the interview, I'd just like to clarify that Minhyun was simply a mental voice that Junhyun gets to hear. It sorta works vice versa too. Like if Minhyun was the one taking over, Junhyun could mentally talk to him.
Also, it's alright, really! I didn't mind waiting and your review was totally worth it!
Thank you again for accepting Junhyun~
ibangyongguk
#4
Chapter 1: have you set the deadline for this yet?
Soonyangel
#5
Chapter 6: Thank you for your kind review, Ash ! Tbh, I though everyone would apply for the connections, so I was kind of scared haha.
He's a man of nickname~ Hm, I don't know much about Chinese, but I feel like he'd be semi-fluent in Cantonese since it's also spoken in HK, and know a bit of Mandarin.
I wanted a delicate looking face claim that would seem harmless. He's perfect for that ! No but seriously, I use his face so much for apps I'm not even sorry anymore.
I had Hermione in mind for that, like he looks like he knows everything and he actually does haha. I'm so glad you like his personality and background, I was so worried~ It was so long woops sorry haha, but hey, you should get used to it with me, after all xD I wanted Sangjoong's and Sehyun's relationship to be quite ambiguous, with hate but not so much etc. Grandma Oh was so adorable~ Actually, I wondered how they could have met, and I saw that your character loved people who had knowledge, and since Sehyun knows a whole bunch of things, I thought it could be nice for them to have a 'serious' relationship, like two sane people x)
Tbh I feel like he'd be better with an applicant, but I wrote for both. I feel like he'd need someone out of his gang to give him some fresh air, yet he'd be scared to put them in danger, so he'd be torn, and since it'd be a new person, he'd discover a whole new world. I almost felt like he'd be torn between this world that seems full of happiness and his gang, for the first time in his life, he'd feel the same thing as his brother, who wanted to leave the gang. It's complicated, sorry ;u;
Oh my, don't thank me for that, Ash ! Your ideas are just so great , I can't resist good plots ^^ Gosh, I'm not over the movie's end either, I cried so hard. Ah, POTF made a song for the games Alan Wake and Max Payne 2, maybe that's why his voice sounds familiar ? They're Finnish and awesome, I'm glad I could introduce you to them ! :)
(This is so long, woops)
Soonyangel
#6
Chapter 7: My my, this teaser broke my heart. Poor little Jaehwan was so heartbreaking, reaching for his mom and not understanding why they were taking his father away. The innocence of a child is so pure, yet so sad ;u; His mom was being so strong for her son, damn ;u;
The 'handlers' were all there and I really like how they all seem to connect because of revenge, how it brings them closer even though it's terrible to be linked because of that.
I'm speechless yet again, this was such a great teaser, short but full of emotions; (teachmesenpai/sobs)
On another note, it motivated me to finish my app so yeah, it's done \o/
hiikyoung
#7
Question!
I was thinking of a hacker/computer type character who manages information and such for the organization he used to work for. Would it be better to have him as a wildcard or connections?
kanqwu
#8
Chapter 7: okay teaser time.
the mood of the funeral holy hot damn. those first few sentences there to begin with just describing the colors ;;
i like how you can see the assembling of the police, and my heart broke when little jaehwan was wondering why they were putting him in hte ground. "he still has to fight the bad guys!" oh my god ash can you spare me please. you could feel the anguish in the family, though they all had differing ways of showing it. and then sangjoong, the sparks in his eyes, the little knowledge passed that vengeance will be carried out. i love that, the beginning of the idea of how they were going to catch the murderer in the first place. this was a good teaser ash okay? i promise you.
i agree though, i can only write well between 11pm-12am haha