Chapter 170: Thank you so much for the very honest review. I will improve in my mistakes and eliminate those cliches and errors. :"D
I'm very glad that my story is actually one that people will read, lol. Once again. thank you for your hard work. I promise to credit you later.^^
Chapter 169: hey thanks for the review ^ ^
In fact I don't understand why you say that beauty and beast doesn't make sense, the title actually refers more to Youngwoon who is a beauty and a beast. The et was not supposed to be french but Latin.
about the house it's a touristic point so everybody in town knows it is inhabited so it was not a dark place Sungmin got there at night he just misunderstood that he house was inhabited and in fact Sungmin was carefree because he was not afraid to be hunted by the mafia boss. Throughout the story he was confident that he could escape whoever would come after him. The suspense or drama of getting caught was not the main point because he was not worried. He was being cautious of keeping a low profile but he was overly confident in his skill, in your review you practically didn't mention Youngwoon who at least in my head was actually the main lead. the biggest point of the story, again at least in my head was the love triangle between Youngwoon and Sungmin’s lives. I feel slightly disappointed that you commented so much on what had never been the main goal of my intent (Sungmin escaping from whoever was chasing him) but said nothing on Youngwoon or the complications about Sungmin’s past life what was actually supposed to be the main point of everything. Sungmin chose that town at random because his fate or destiny was there, Youngwoon was there.
Unfortunately my beta reader kind of abandoned me so I had no one to help me with the grammar. I'll try to edit the font for the story, was the color a problem too or just the size of the font? And pardon me I'm on my phone so I'll credit the shop later when I get back home. Once again thank you for the time spent in the review.
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