My English essay

 

 

 

=.= Teacher asked us to write a 300 words long essay about our life in form of a fairy tale...

XD I'm a bad student it was due today morning and I'm sending it to her, saying I couldn't print it when... for real... I just didn't do it!

 

We're studying texts forms and what's in it: Plot, , intro and such... =_= as if I needed to know how it's made... YO TEACHER! those classes! I could teach them in your place!!!

 

( lol I did over 500 words XD )

 

Here's it:

 

 

Princess Mary

 

 

Once upon a time, in a faraway land, lived a little princess called Mary. Mary had golden curly

 

hair, pale skin and blue-green eyes. She was the princess of two kingdoms since her father and her

 

mother didn't lived together. She was the only heir over her father's side because she was the only child

 

the king ever had. While on her mother's side, she had two younger brothers: prince Mark, the eldest

 

son, and prince Zach, the youngest son.

 

 

 

 

After some years, the queen quickly found a new husband, Eric, a hunter. She loved him very very

 

much but Mary didn't liked that man. Eric was a tough guy, he'd lived in the woods and had known

 

hard life. Mary was a quiet child and sensitive. They didn't get along so they often fight. Mary didn't

 

liked that man at all and she hated living with him, it brought her anxiety and affected her school

 

marks. Her who was a very good student, the teacher noticed it and asked her about it but she didn't

 

said anything. Mary was a shy girl.

 

 

 

Eventually, the queen left the hunter since they didn't completed each other well... instead she

 

started going out with a Sorcerer, Matt. Matt was several years younger than the queen, about ten. Mary

 

didn't liked him either at all. She found him too childish and immature. She asked about spending the

 

two years left of elementary school in her Dad's kingdom and live with him for those years. Gladly, the

 

queen agreed. The king had married a Nurse, Audrey, who had four girls older than Mary: Roxanne, the

 

elder, Suzy, the middle, and Vicky, the younger. The latter was some months older than Mary but the

 

four of them were pretty friendly to each other.

 

 

 

Then, Mary spent her two years left at a school in the King's kingdom while her two brothers

 

stayed with her mom. On the last year, the queen and the sorcerer started having some fights so the

 

King decided to keep Mary with him not get her involved in those things. The princess started High

 

school in her dad's kingdom and everything was going very well for her. During her second year of

 

high school the queen broke up with the sorcerer and even exiled him out of her land and the King

 

broke up with the Nurse too. Now Mary was living alone with her Dad in the castle. When she entered

 

fourth grade, she was told that her brother, Mark, had fell very sick. She was very worried and her Dad

 

took her to the hospital to see prince Mark, but sadly, eleven years before his birthday, prince Mark

 

passed away, leaving the Queen with only one heir left who was far too young to even hold a sword.

 

 

 

Finally, Mary Finished High school easily and entered College, going to study languages. She has

 

the ambition to become a language teacher and go overseas to teach the foreign kids. She has a big

 

interest into Asian culture and wanted to visit all the countries of Asia and learn the languages,

 

especially Thailand, China and South-Korea. She didn't wanted to become queen and run the kingdom,

 

she wanted to sail the seven seas and see the world as an adventuress.

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ArabianQueen
#1
I loved your story.
Go On, and sail the world.
I wish you luck. =>