Story Title (5/5): A perfect title. Even though it’s commonly used, it’s okay, because the title depicts it all. Not eye-catching that much, but for angst lovers, it’s definitely a spot-on. The title tied it down together with the ending so well; a perfect fit. Very creative yet so simple.

Appearance (9/10): The poster….ouch. That is one beautiful poster. Even though black is a bit commonly used…a splash of other colours may be well...but nah, the angst is deep and harsh, so the poster is okay. The genres..you really did a great job. The genres are from the beginning until the end and the way you constructed the story is simply beautiful and neat.

Description (10/10): The description is such a heart breaker. Breathtaking and shuddering. Wow…truly terrifying. The description is really not that much, only enough and it definitely hooked it all up.

Characters (15/15): The characters…wow…you played them greatly throughout, exploring them and creating new diversion in them and let the readers know a new age of them and definitely I tell you, that you’re a great author.

Kyuhyun…oh my….

Originality/Plot (20/20): I haven’t seen anything like this for. Maybe yes, the name ‘fractured’ because you base the title on it, but I tell you that you gave us (readers) a new meaning of fractured and wow…the construction of plot and how it begins and how it ends…truly terrifying and shocking.

Flow (20/20): Everything is all well, marked it down from the beginning until the end and nothing was amiss. Everything is on pace and on beat and you did a great job because of that.

Spelling (14/15): Because of how you wrote this story…I’m so lost of words…I actually can’t say anything and almost didn’t see the mistakes. Minor ones, really. Don’t worry much. Punctuations.

Enjoyment (5/5): Totally enjoyed this. As a fan of angst and a major of it, I definitely love it. But setting that aside, I really love the story. SO much. Really…wow.

Total: (98/100)=98%

Extra Comment: Wow…what….I can’t….wow….I’m lost of words….