Title (5/5):

Wow…the title is really a spot on. Eye-catching and definitely creative. Even though the story isn’t halfway done, the title showed some relation with the plot and seriously, the title is really exquisite. You really did a great job in coming up with the title…wow.

Design (15/15):

The genres are great, creating a beautiful suspense and wow…the genres are well distributed around, creating a chill of curiosity and suspense. Beautifully constructed and the poster! Such a great one and definitely eye-catching, mixing well to the plot and genres. The writing style is simple, balanced description and narration. A well-off writing style. The design is neat, simple and organized.

Mechanics (9/10):

Found one to two errors. Nothing serious, really. Just minor, like punctuations and so. The mechanics are fine. The others are fine and nothing seems a miss. The vocabulary is simple and easy to understand.

Characters (9/10):

The characters played their roles very well, living up to their personality and background. I can’t say much since the story hasn’t progressed out yet, but I could definitely be assured that the characters are something more than I expected.

Originality/Plot (23/25):

Wow, the plot’s originality is really something. I could sense the thrill that is soon the come and I would love to see how the story progress! I could see that some of it is a bit religious and that blood is like one of the main source of the plot. I would love to see how things go. I’m sorry if I can’t say much, but I’m really loving to see how the plot because it’s promising and nice.

Flow (14/15):

The flow is nice and has a great pacing. It’s not fast and showed the important scenes, creating a simple introduction and showing the preview of the plot. The flow is really nice and is on the beat. I would love to see how the story progress!

Finale (/10): I won’t grade this down since there is no finale yet.

Enjoyment (10/10):

I enjoyed the first two chapters. I really love it and I could say nothing more.

Total: (85/90) = 95%

Reviewers Note: Hi! Sorry for the late review!! Hope you’re okay with the review *bows* Thank you for requesting and hope you’ll come back again.