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Foreword:

Late one night, I lay comfortably in my twin sized bed- staring at the blank ceiling, empty thoughts swirling through my tired mind. I suddenly heard this slight crashing sound, like delicate porcelain onto glossy tiled floors. Sitting upright, I looked about curiously for the source of the sound, only to find a pooling sensation from my eyes- salty and bitter to the taste. Wiping away at the droplets hastily, I climbed out of bed- still on the search for the source of the broken porcelain sound. I found my way to the bathroom, tiptoed inside and slowly flicked on the light switch.

Carefully staring into the mirror under the yellow light, I found the source.

It wasn't porcelain that had been broken.

It was me. 

(tentative story posters)

 

This is a preview of one of my potential new stories. Still working out the kinks- unsure if I want it to be a SeoKris (i.e, romance) story or a Yoona/Seohyun-centric story (i,e. internal/personal conflict).

What do you all think? ^^ It won't be written for a while actually- but I had these posters done for a longgg time, I was simply waiting for the right story line to come along. :) 

Suggestions/critique on possible story plots/ details/ anything in general are much appreciated.

P.S. I wanted to get this down somewhere before I went on hiatus (which will be shortly- wait for me guys!) 

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white_blue
#1
I prefer Seokris.
I sensed that it is some kind of regret and I think it would be better for a love story.
Hope the story will have a happy ending :)
glamzchic
#2
SeoKris, please?
I think it will be a deep story with Seohyun's view like that and then when it relates to their relationship.
kei_sainter #3
On first glance it looks more suited to seohyun-yoona but I'm a little intrigued about how you'd use it for Seokris!! Btw, I love the idea of posters waiting for a plot rather than the other way around for most people!
Eycha_sk11 #4
seokris !!!!! <333
seoshi #5
i'll wait. make it seokris pleaseeee *pppyeyes the preview is well writen, i cant wait to read the whole story ^^
khunnung96
#6
seokris :)
Popopo #7
Seokris:) please
seophi
#8
i hope its seokris..update soon..
--kyubunny
#9
That was a really good foreword. c: In my opinion, I think it would fit better if it was based on the internal struggles of Yoona/Seohyun. I don't really find stories like that and I think you'd be able to convey a message and write it beautifully. I'd definitely read it. ^^b