Will this work? - Taoris XD

so, i wanna make a story about Taoris
It'll be more like boys love, not rated

This is some preview


"I love a girl,
She's always take care of me, and love me,
But our love ruined, just like that,
I could never forget you,
I bury our memories so deep in my heart, that I will never forget you,
My heart is filled only by you,
I closed my heart tightly,
Be cool, because my heart's is still sore, "

......

"But he's coming .. He's reminding me of you,
He treats me just like the way you do,
He come to my life, and slowly open my hearts,
Can i fall in love with him?”

- It's all Tao's mindset -

***

"We live together,
But why do I never knew you better?
You look hollow and alone in college, even at home though,
I'd love to know about you more. About what you like, what you do not like, even what makes
you sad and happy,
However, you close your heart to me tightly,
I tried to open it,
What I get is that I'm similar to the person you love,
But, I'm not her. I'm me. Can you just see myself
as what it is?
Can I love you? "

- It's Kris' mindset –


 

What do you think? Is that good for a preview? :3

 

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familywinnerx #1
GREAT IT WILL WORK. ^-^
Jeggingkissme
#2
It's really good !!!