Story title: ♔♔♔♔

Memory in the Rain...it's poetic, I'll give you that. And, as it's hard to come up with a creative story title, especially for just oneshots, I'll go easy. But it is rather...unmemorable? But after reading the story along with it, I felt it fit very well. Since everything happened in the rain.

Story poster/background: ♔♔♔♔

The poster is really pretty, and goes with the story since it has a rainy and angst feel to it.

Foreword/Description: ♔♔♔♔♔

Giving full marks because wow. It was spooky... I'm not sure if it's something you wrote yourself or from a song or whatever, but it fit so well and kind of gave me goosebumps. Good job~!

Characters: ♔♔♔

The characters were well developed for a one shot, the relations were explained and you took the time to let them have real, thought out emotions and relations.

Originality: ♔♔♔♔

It's a basic tragic story, but it's so well written, I'm not taking much off. I felt a lot of emotion coming from the story it wasn't like I was reading some of the same kinds of stuff I had been reading before. Plus, the accident wasn't a car crash or something cliché like that. It had an accident I had never seen before. So, kudos.

Flow: ♔♔♔

(Too fast that makes you cannot understand what is going on? Too draggy, makes you yawn and feel like exiting the story?)

Not going to lie, it kind of went too fast. But, since it's a one shot it's understandable. There were parts of the story where I was confused as to what time it was taking place. Despite that, confusion was cleared up pretty quickly. But, if you're planning on editing I suggest page breaks.

Grammer, Spelling etc: ♔♔♔♔

There were a couple here and there, but nothing too eye catching or serious.

Bonus: ♔♔

It was kind of really sad. I really felt Myungsoo's pain in it. And actually, I prefer these angst type stories over the lovey dovey ones.

Total: ♔♔♔♔

Woohoo~ You've earned a four, which means you'll be in our featured list. And it's a definite recommend from me.