If you are going to write a story that has an awesome title, then please for the love of all things holy, reread what you write.  I began reading a story that seemed like it would be awesome, but gave up after the first few lines because of all the stupid mistakes and errors.  I make mistakes too, but this was down right rediculous.  99% of the time when I write a story, I will write a few paragraghs and then proofread.  After I have finished a story or chapter, I reread and proofread it again.  Yes I might miss a mistake here and there, but it's not every damn sentence or every other word like this story was. 

Oh well....Off to bed I guess...