Hi again, Akira! There are just a few things I need you to change before I can accept Reona so let's get into it.
First off as Reona was a member of AKB48, I would prefer if you didn't use a faceclaim from the 48/46 groups. Moving on to her talent twins, please add a stronger lead vocal twin for Reona as I feel Jiho is too weak for the plot of the unappreciated. Also as I have no idea who Nene is, it would be great if you could provide a video or change her dance twin to someone else.
If you fix what I have mentioned I would be happy to accept Reona!
Hi I has realised that making the free plotline main vocal may cause some issues when it comes to selecting a line up as if I were to accept a larger lineup there is a high chance it would include multiple applicants from the other plotline. So I just wanted to let you know that if you are willing to change Yuna's bakup vocal twin to someone who is just a vocalist that may increase her chances of being chosen! Of course you don't have to if you would prefer not to.
Hey there Akira! Thank you for applying with another character for Pandora. I will keep your review short ad let you know that Chaehee has been accepted!
Oh sorry, I forgot to mention this in her review, but could you maybe push when Yeonjun confessed to Yuna until after her 18th birthday? I would rather all characters be of age when their love story really begins.
Hey Akira! Thanks for being willing to alter Yuna. Let's jump right into your review.
First off, there is still a small mention of Yuna having a child that you forgot to take out of the end of her background, so it would be nice if you could alter that. When it comes to her scandal, I would love some more information on it such as how her members reacted and how the public reacted to it as you don't really mention that. And finally, as Yuna's love interest is an OC, please add one or two backup faceclaims for him. Also it would be great if you could mention why he was promoting a song called August D when there is no mention of this name being relevant to him.
If you fix the things I mentioned, I would be happy to accept her!
Hey there Akira! Thanks for being the first to apply. I just wanted to let you know that unfortunately I don't think a married idol with a child really fits with the image of Sowon. I feel like a pregnancy scare or scandal would be fine but having a baby and such is a bit much, especially since the girls would have to live in a dorm together for some of my ideas. I am not sure if you would be willing to change Yuna so she wasn't a mother or married. Please let me know when you can!
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