Okay so, I didn't want to sound mean or anything, so i hope this doesn't come off the wrong way but i think that jessica is a bit too mature of a character for the story? She seems more suited for something with an "M" rating and i didn't intend on making any part of the story any worse than pg-13 at the most. She's super interesting though in like a niche, japanese manga heroine that wants to bang her brother kind of way? that sounds weird but I just think she's a tad bit too mature for the sort of vibe i had in mind. I do appreciate the effort though, the app is really well put together ;; i hope this doesn't come off the wrong way at all OTL i just think the other two are more in line with the story vibes and jessica would either need to be scrubbed down a bit to match but i don't think that's fair, character wise. Once again, I'm sorry if this sounds rude, i just didn't want to have to pick her to pieces and have you change her into something she isn't for the sake of a story when you have two good characters all ready submitted, if that makes sense