CITRUS / AKIRA'S GIRLS

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catwomanchae Icy but I'm on fire.
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December 12, 1994
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withlove.erika 絶対好きと言わせたい.
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February 14, 1997 see translation
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dem0npr1ncess Focus on me.
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buttfluff
#1
im working on my citrus girl and since mine is also gonna be a prior sm trainee, my girl would most likely know chaehee
so is it okay to add chaehee to my girl's app in a collab? i think it would be really nice~
nappeunge
#2
hey akira, if i do this, can i add chaehee to my character's app?
cruisr
#3
Hey again Akira! Sorry for the late review for Taeri. I'll keep it short and just let you know that there is nothing wrong with Taeri. She has been accepted! I hope you don't mind that it's so short I just thought that since I kept you waiting it was best to get straight to the point. Thank you for submitting another character to Citrus!
cruisr
#4
Hi Akira! I really like Erika, but there are a few things that need to be fixed/changed before I can accept Erika.

First off, could you please change Erika's backup faceclaim to someone who is easier to find photos of and has a slightly larger range of photos? It was a little hard to find photos of her faceclaim and backup so I would like to have a backup who is a little easier to find resources of. You also mention in her trivia section that she is a fan of Love Live, but as Erika's faceclaim has something to do with Love Live, could you please remove that?

Another thing that isn't an issue but I just wanted to mention is that I don't think a member of Citrus announcing she was dating another female so soon after debut would work with the story, so that would have to maybe be pushed back a couple of years.

Other than those small things, Erika is fantastic! If you can change what I mentioned, I would be more than happy to accept her! Thanks for applying again and I can't wait to see your next character (I mean if the front page is anything to go by)!
cruisr
#5
Hey there Akira! You haven't added a full password for Erika. Could you please do that before I review her? Thanks!
cruisr
#6
Hey there Akira! Thanks for being the first applicant for Citrus! First off, I love Chanhee’s love for rock. I’m personally a huge rock fan and I grew up on a lot of the music mentioned in your application (especially Guns N’ Roses and No Doubt). Also just a heads up that I have added Jangmi and Beodeul’s traits, so if you wanted to add her relationship with them that would be cool!

I love all your suggestions! I was actually thinking of sub-units with basically the same names. Your password is also really good. Ade is so fitting I love it!

Anyway, since this review is late I will just jump to the point. I couldn’t find any issues with your application so, Chanhee has been accepted!