1. I like that the drabble is just 1 paragraph. it gives me the feeling that "I" was just pouring out their emotions and not really caring about anything. 

although for " they all don’t belong to me anymore" I think it would flow better if it was "none of them belong to me anymore"

2. omg all of these drabbles are going to angsty as asdk;hfx. i do like how you show that being gay isn't considered "normal" in real life, because many fics act like it's totally normal/realistic for everyone to be openly gay

3. okay wow, what just happened. your descriptions are amazing!! (although it's not believable that the main character can process all that while falling to their death lol) and i really want to know what happened because wat watwat

4. omg, it's a siren right? if yes, then i love how you portrayed it differently and gave it actual feelings/emotions/love instead of just a seductive killer. even though i love seductive killer sirens, but still! it was a short drabble and you managed to create such depth.

5. yas~~ a fluffy fic! there's not much i can say, it was just really nice and gave me warm feeling ^_^

6. i have a thing for metaphors and this drabble was A+. i like the nuances and the way you showed how captivating but toxic the relationship actually was

7. eep another "you" and "I" pov~~ i seriously like these lol. it was a nice slice of life drabble! and if it were me, i would not let the person in :p

8. i actually.. couldn't breathe while reading it. it's sad but i can relate so much and it hit me hard >u< good job!

9. :O did he kill himself? omggg the only thing i'm sure about is that his wife is dead and that dress is her wedding dress. and ahh i'm so ?? but in a good way

10. omfg this is so extra and dramatic, especially the imagery and descriptions in the beginning! i just wish the spacing was easier on the eyes.

11. it look me until halfway through the 2nd paragraph to go "OHH." i like how you showed the different perspectives, how 1 person loves someone who loves someone who loves someone else. and everyone is sad and suffering. but i have hope that if you continued this, it would have a happy ending lol

12. ohmygod this brought back so many bad memories of school T_T it's great how you took a different approach! rarely do ppl write about this

13. i just think of bts jimin when i see bathtub i like the development in this drabble~ in the beginning he's numb. but at the end, he decides to stop thinking about minhyuk and can finally feel the coldness of the water

14. the shift from the seemingly average 1st sentence to suddenly "when he knew he would be dying the next day"  is he a phoenix of some sort? and what exactly is her power? i need to know more about this world!!

15. oh wow, your writing was simple and straightforward but somehow i couldn't breathe when i was reading it. you seriously did a great job!

16.  i want to know what exactly happened to them :( the way you portrayed their feelings was really genuine.

17.  i was walking back from dance yesterday and it started raining. my friend joked that we should dance in the rain and idk.. i just imagined jimin dancing in the rain and expressing all his sadness with his moves...but then you had him lose control of his body and fall lol

18. i could really feel the frantic panic and anxiety. i was hoping it was just a nightmare and then i got to the end. still hoping it's a nightmare and not a really dark fantasy drabble, but good job!

19. the metaphors and similes you used were beautiful. that's all i can say, beautiful~

20. i started thinking that maybe it was zelo himself, and then the ending was aksd;fak i honestly got goosebumps. omg i really really really love this

21. aw everyone needs a friend like taekwoon! your drabble was realistic and i like the term "cloying miasma." i hope it's ok if i use it from now on haha

22. me: /sees "wet tongue"/ - oh, is this ?

/sees "thick fur"/ - is it a dog? and then... oh i get it now XD i have a soft spot for demon!aus and yuk jidam is awesome~

23. winkun T_T this is my first time reading a winkun fic and it's so sad. it's good because i love angst, but the ending ... ahh poor bb

24. the title is so beautiful, but i'm not really sure how it relates to the fic? and why did jeonghan dream of that? i want to know more >_<