hi guys! i just posted my newly made fic titled fourteen and forever.

it's kaisoo.

i'm not yet confident with it, but i posted it so maybe you can help me improve it.

i want to refine the story further, but of course i couldn't do it all by myself.

so i need your insights.

maybe you can read it if you have some time? pwease huhu and tell me what i need to improve or what's wrong with it. then i'll think of considering.

it's just a  oneshot, 7k words.

thanks guys!

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here's the link http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1098041/