Story Review: FOReVEr WITh YOU by serendipity--
My third review of serendipity-- story! I just finished reading one two shots story of hers, and I was screaming like crazy, literally.
It is "FOReVEr WITh YOU". So here we go~
RATE ON A SCALE OF 1-10:
1. Viewing comfort: 9
2. Title: 9
3. Plot (originality): 9
4. Plot Development: 9
5. Characterizations: 10
6. Ending: 10
As we see, rate on scale for this story is really good because indeed the story is very good. It is so fluffy and cute and sweet. The kind of story that makes us screaming for its cheesiness, sweetness, cuteness, and everything. It is written neatly in steady plot. Slightly, it will look just too simple, but you'll find yourself repeating the scenes from that fic over and over in your head.
The best part I love from the story is Chanyeol proposal moment. Because right there I screamed so loud, "WHAT IS THIS, THIS IS TOO IN CHEESY" then giggled by myself.
But xiuhan side-story just stuck in my mind. I mean, they are the not-so-cheesy-and-realistic-and-sarcastic-yet-still-sweet couple which make me can't help but wonder about their future. From their little part of story, I could tell that they love each other in very humanly way, but doesn't their knot isn't strong. Really want to read about them more! Is there any sequel for this fic? ^^
That's all for my third review!
FOReVEr WITh YOU by serendipity--
My edit for this story in tumblr!
www.myueworld.tumblr.com/post/130548011184/and-the-third-is-that-chanyeol-pauses-reaching
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