Story Review: Look at Me, Too! by serendipity--
Today I read two serendipity-- stories, and I'll write the review immediately.
The first one is, "Look at Me, Too!"
RATE ON A SCALE OF 1-10:
1. Viewing comfort: 9
2. Title: 9
3. Plot (originality): 8
4. Plot Development: 8
5. Characterizations: 8
6. Ending: 9
About this story... what must I say? It's kind of fluffy story which could make us overwhelmed with the emotions. I mean, something about jealousy in the relationship never fail to sink our hearts, right? So, yeah, I like Baekhyun jealous state in that fic.
The ending was sweet, but something I can't get rid of my mind is, why baekhyun didn't bother to ask the reason why chanyeol kept ignoring him all day and talking to kyungsoo instead. Why he said baek was dork and stuff. God, kisses really made baek forget all desperation he had before! XP
I read this during my class and I almost got caught by my teacher cause I was grinning in myself in the corner of my classroom. Haha. But it worth it I think, it made my day however.
And here my tumblr edit for this fic! XD
www.myueworld.tumblr.com/post/130614805399/youre-an-idiot-baekhyun-chanyeol-said-softly
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