Story Review: Forevermore by serendipity--
Yey, I'm going to review another story from serendipity. I read it yesterday actually, but I refused to make the review before I read the epilogue. Because I just finished reading Painting Spring this afternoon, here I go with the review for "Forevermore".
RATE ON A SCALE OF 1-10:
1. Viewing comfort: 9
2. Title: 9
3. Plot (originality): 8
4. Plot Development: 9
5. Characterizations: 10
6. Ending: 8
It is no joke. I mean, this story got featured, man! So I think it would be no doubt about the quality of this fic. Yeah, and I found it really worth-featured. It is neatly written and full of emotions (really suit the tag, angst). I think every reader could feel how chanyeol's life changes from gloomy before baekhyun to bright with baekhyun and then completely dark after baekhyun left. Once you read it, you'll completely get into this fic.I myself didn't even notice I was screaming "no no no" when chanyeol got the news about baek plane until my friend slap my arm. It is really... hypnotizing? Yeah, I think it is the appropriate word.
But I couldn't help but comparing between this fic and another angst from the same author which I read two days ago (The Stars, They Shine for You Tonight). I don't know, but I just somehow love the second fic I mentioned more than Forevermore. It is not because I'm xiuhan shipper, because honestly I'm the biggest baekyeol shipper as well. Yes, indeed I got very sad by Chanyeol deep sadness, but I couldn't feel it the way I should. I could feel the emotions of Luhan and Minseok in "The Stars, They Shine for You Tonight" better. Or maybe I just didn't read it well enough? Hahaha.
Probably, it was because Chanyeol feeling was so deep and complicated (he is immortal after all), so I could say that this fic is a bit "heavy". In literature, this fic would be categorized into a high-class literature. Am I too dumb to enjoy this fic to the fullest?
Shortly, "The Stars, They Shine for You Tonight" is simple yet complicated while "Forevermore" is complicated yet simple. Oh what am I even talking about? I said nonsense.
Oh, and a question bothering me, "what is Chanyeol?" Why is he immortal? Is he vampire?! (Okay, ignore this. To be honest, I was twihard before I know kpop :p)
But, I love this fic so much, however. This absolutely great and amazing. Not to mention, my eyes were teared up so badly (I was once again in my class, and my classmates threw me weird look). Like I said before, "Forevermore" is really really worth-featured. :)))
My tumblr edit for this fic! XD
www.myueworld.tumblr.com/post/130747650449/were-always-together-remember-chanyeol-you
P.S: I'm not a big fan of sad ending, so I'm really looking forward for Painting Spring next update. Wishing all the best for the honorable author! XD
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