I don't know if I would have another free time next week. So before I forget what I read last night, I want to just make the review immediately. Okay, so this time is "A Piece of Me for You to Keep".

www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/747367

RATE ON A SCALE OF 1-10:

1. Viewing comfort: 9

2. Title: 9

3. Plot (originality): 9

4. Plot Development: 9

5. Characterizations: 10

6. Ending: 8

This is masterpiece! Well, I think I'm deeply in love with serendipity-- angst fics. The very best thing I love from the story is its plot. It is complicated, unreadable, and breathtaking in the same time. Everyone who read this will keep wondering "how is" and "who is" and so on. And after all, the off the record life of idols will always be the interesting thing to be the story theme, right?

The characterization is awesome as well. We could see how caring and fearless jongin is, while kyungsoo is somewhat lost.

But it is quite disappointing because I didn't feel this story reached its to the fullest. I mean, I kinda had expected (even from foreword) that I'll be like sobbing mess around the time the truths were revealed (because I read some of comments below the story as a spoiler before reading the real story). And from the first time Kyungsoo get the hospital, I kept waiting for the time Jongin will reveal their past. I was so sure it is a very painful truth, and yeah it is. But author didn't put that much emotions in the confession moment. I admit my eyes were teared up, but I expected the scene to be more emotional.

The ending is actually beautiful, but it didn't leave too much impression. Probably, it's due to the said ? Perhaps. But after all, this fic this still great masterpiece. I can't help but keep imagining scene after scene from this fic story.

Ah ya, and I was kinda curious about the song fans and kyungsoo sang in the last part. Is it original lyrics from the author, or it is the song I should know? Hahaha.

And this the tumblr edit for this one!

www.myueworld.tumblr.com/post/130946568014/its-kim-jongin-kyungsoo-bumps-his-head-on