I just found this author about two or three days ago, but I am really sure that I'm in love with her stories. And since she is holding a cool giveaway, I will try to keep reviewing each story of hers after I finished read one (because this GA is effort-based and I just want to show how much my effort is XP).

So here it is, my review for the story "A Cold Night Like This" by serendipity--

RATE ON A SCALE OF 1-10:

1. Viewing comfort: 9

2. Title: 9

3. Plot (originality): 8

4. Plot Development: 8

5. Characterizations: 10

6. Ending: 8

The best part of her fic is, how she managed her characters live naturally and adorably. Jongin is childish yet manly, in the other hand, kyungsoo is sarcastic yet caring. And personally I think that the strongest charm of fluff is in the characterization.

This is kind of story that we read when we want something sweet to make our day. And as the result, we'll giggle like crazy hahaha. It isn't too light or something, it is just right for the fluffy thing as it is. So I don't think I could mention any particular weakness. Maybe just a bit too short? Haha, I often get sad when a great story last very fast ><.

www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/472134/on-cold-nights-like-this-fluff-exo-exok-kai-jongin-kyungsoo-kaisoo

My edit for this story in tumblr!

www.myueworld.tumblr.com/post/130499777204/jongin-its-not-raining-anymore-kyungsoo-says