Story Review: pour me a cup ('cause i'd like to get to know you) by Serendipity--
In order to follow an amazing GA from Serendipity--, I want to write a story review for one of her story, by the title "pour me a cup"
RATE ON A SCALE OF 1-10
1. Viewing comfort (how pleasing to the eye is the story layout): 9
2. Title: 7
3. Plot (originality): 8
4. Plot Development: 8
5. Characterizations: 9
6. Ending: 8
My favorite thing from this story is that it is written neatly and it is simple without too complicated conflict yet it's undoubtedly cute and heart-warming. The characters have their own strong personality that matched perfectly with the plot of story.
But I do think that this story could be much more angsty and fluffy at the same time, but unfortunately the author didn't put that much emotions in it. It become light and easy-reading, but some readers probably hoping something more emotional (or it was only me? XP).
What stuck in my mind after reading it was that I really wish for sequel. It is indeed a nice story, but it is only the beginning when xiuhan began to get to know each other. What a joy to know their progress in the future! Maybe they actually open their own coffee shop and get married and then live happily ever after? It would be really cheesy yet cute XD oh, and maybe a little conflict here and their with Minseok insecurities or Luhan's parents disapproval for their relationship? I can wonder it already, haha. Really wait for next updates from the stories of yours, author-nim! ><
And maybe that's all? ^^
My edit for this story in tumblr! ^^
www.myueworld.tumblr.com/post/130470371744/youre-so-different-different-from-what
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