New Story - Your Opinions.

Hello dear readers < 3

 

 

Since I finished my last story Timeless I've been working on a new project and I am currently writing the fourth chapter of this story. It's  another type of story happening in the past. ( Not fantastic this time , the context is more realistic) 

 

I wanted to know if you would be interested to read it or not. Actually I didn't really wrote this one to be published but rather to amuse myself. 

 

Here is a short resume : 

 

 

It was the summer of 1954. The air was warm and we finally started to breath some fresh air after the past 4 years of war our country had been in. It was the summer of dreams and hopes. To me , a naive 19 years old , everything seemed possible. A last summer of freedom before I married some stranger to the benefict of my dear father. A last summer with my friend ,Yuri ,away from all the cities and strange people living in them. 

 

One last summer were I could enjoy doing what I like to do. One last summer dream were I don't have nothing to do except having fun with the people I love. 

 

One summer in a mindblowing summer house next to the shore. Two unexpected guest. I wasn't expecting my cousin, who spend more than 3 years at war ,  to come and spend the summer with us but ... even less the other one. 

 

A strange , quiet and mysterious man. A war hero who saved the life of my cousin and , this way , won his trust and friendship. 

 

I never expected them to come .I never expected them to stay the whole summer. I never expected to feel this kind of attraction and curiousity for a stranger.

 

And I certainly never expected this stranger to stole my heart away..

 

All of that during the summer of 1954.

 

Well I hope you find it at least a bit interesting :$ 

 

The cast is so on :

 

Main protagonist : Miyeon

Main protagonist best friend : Yuri

Cousin : Oh Sehun

Stranger : Byun Baekhyun 

 

(Yep I know , don't  judge my bias love. ) 

I would also need your help for the title. I had a few idea but tell me what you think is the best .

 

- Memoirs of the Past 

-Memoirs of a Summer With You.

-Summer of 1954.

 

If you had any other suggestion... go ahead ^^

 

Love you all and don't forget to comment about your opinion <3 

 

Laulau95 

 

 

 

 

 

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michelle1st
#1
Glad u'r back, Love the title :D
I'll put it on my subs stories and read it on weekend. I can't go online these days bc of work T.T
baiqian
#2
Omg the summary is so beautiful! I love the title "Summer of 1954" :)
unicorngirl7
#3
I like what you wrote as a summary, it really makes you want to know what is going to happen that summer and what will happen when it ends. I liked Summed of 1954. I don't know why; it just caught my attention as soon as I read it. I really hope you consider posting it :D
Vickey
#4
Hahaha I don't know but while I was reading the prologue the only thought that came to mymind was "ah the hero should definitely be baekhyun" and then when u told it actually is I screamed internally haha
and how about memories(instead of memoirs) of a summer with you? :)
maybe just ' a summer with you'
Or 'that summer about you and me' ? Idk but I'm sure you will know best
kpop_angel44 #5
The summer you stole my heart, 1954
haha its just a suggestion but my favorite by far is 'summer of 1954' short and it's already like a memory.
mischievous_akmood
#6
I like fics that are somewhat realistic lol XD
judging from the intro, this fic looks pretty interesting so far, and I'm looking forward to it ^^
sekaii
#7
I like Summer of 1954! It doesn't give out too much of the story and also pulls in the readers.
One of the reasons why I chose this one was the other two made me think of "Memoirs of a Geisha." I know my reasoning is off, but haha.
Like it makes me wonder, what's so special about that summer in 1954?
And it sounds interesting! I've always had an interest in back-to-the-past stories!
Good luck with developing your stories.
Cutejewel
#8
I think Memoirs of a Summer With You is a good title and I can't wait for this fanfic to come out !!