http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/990046/ i think there might be some tense errors and grammatical errors there.

Chapter 6: Thanks for the review

Chapter 5: Picking up! Thank you so much for the review! I don't have to worry much about the score on Grammar/Narrative elements because I knew it's going to be low. However, this helped me to take note on my future writings because I wasn't sure if there's story/plot like this in AFF and I'm surprised that you like the story. Also yes, this story has so many questions since it's still ongoing, and i don't want you to take so much time on it. You have plenty of other stories to review! I'm very satisfied with the score too, it helped me to realize I have time to fix the errors and mistakes as you described. If I have a story that needs to review, I definitely will come here again! Thank you and good luck with this review shop!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1005994/1826-days-without-namjoon-angst-jin-bts-rapmonster-namjoon-seokjin-namjin

Thanks in advance!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1004828/beautiful-memory-fluff-romance-sad-sunggyu-sunggyuxoc

here's the link, please take your time (it's still ongoing story)

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/759074/geared-for-pleasure-fantasy-romance-exo-kai

It's a story with an original character and Kai from EXO. Thank you in advance, and take your time ;)