You, I love [Hiatus]

Description

Jung Jinyoung is a leader-like, confident handsome boy with prince disease, while Lee Taemin is a silent, mysterious boy with lots of charms. Together they are a flawless duo, but they needed another companion, a girl who could make their group perfect. They seemed to be people with a lot of power in their hands, but secretly, they are more. They have this one person they do not like, and they want to get rid of him. With the help of their third partner in crime, they want to find out the secrets of their rival Cho Kyuhyun. However, as their plan progresses, their biggest rival is not Cho Kyuhyun anymore. It is… feelings. Will their third companion be able to finish her mission, or will she fail? And how flawless is this group really? Who is everyone? And what is the reason for this impossible mission? The keyword for this story… Is up to you to find.  



He had everything planned out…
                  Befriend him, make him open up to you, nothing more
                                                     She only wanted a future…
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               He wanted to stop it…
                                                                             ‘This is getting out of hand, we should not have put her in it’
                                     But love already caught her
                                                             Or rather, caught them all

Foreword



I have always wondered why people say ‘I love you’, as if to emphasize themselves. For me, it would be ‘You, I love’, because for me, you are way more important than I am.


Storyline

My dream was to become a professional pianist, and ever since my late childhood years, I have been working hard for that dream to come true. Having parents who have just enough to financially support you, it was not only a dream anymore; it was our family’s future. I could not rely solely on my talent, since I was not a piano genius, but I did my utmost best to perfect my playing. When an accident caused my hand to be severely injured, it was as if my world fell apart. As I cried while eating in a restaurant, someone suddenly walked passed my table while leaving a poker card on my table. I did not think too much about it, and picked it up to give it back to him. However, I found out something was written on it. That is when my life takes a whole new turn.



Characters


 


Announcements

(Want to know what this foolish author has planned or changed about the story? Or what she wants to announce? Check the announcements!)
[1] 14/11/11 Changed the description into a longer description
[2] 14/11/11 Character profiles are coming soon!
[3] 17/11/11 Posted chapter 3, next chapter will have to wait a while... :(
[4] 24/11/11 Updates will come soon, please be patient :)
[5] 02/11/11 New update is coming soon! I am busy writing for my other story at the moment, but I will make sure to update this one soon! 
[6] 30/12/11 Writer is temporarily not updating her stories (see blog post for more information)
[7] 17/02/2012 - I have put this story on hiatus for the time being, but will try to update as soon as possible.




A long (and important) author's note

Tinywings is presenting another story! I am extremely excited with this one, since this one means a lot to me. I have had this plot since last summer break, when I went on vacation, and it never left my mind. However, since I already started ‘We were there’, I wanted to write that one first, and I ended up writing a sequel for another story. Therefore, I never had the chance for this one. I have wanted to write a similar story like this one for such a long time already, but I never had the courage to, since it takes a lot of time and effort to come up with a good storyline. However, I am willing to challenge myself with this one.

But this not the only reason why this one story is special to me, and the other reason is that I decided to put some more in it. I did not plan on writing this one so soon, but something caused me to do so. Having reached the age of eighteen and going to my first year of university, I not only matured, I also learned a lot. Hearing stories from my friends who cannot get along with their parents, who cannot seem to communicate with them, and sometimes felt suffocated, it woke me up. Not only because of parents, of course. Even family can be. But I feel like your parents do not have to be arguing to each other, to make your home an unhappy place to be. It does not have to be hatred that separates you and others. Simply the fact that people place distance is enough. Simply the fact that life is not perfect is enough. I used to think my life was ‘normal’, I even looked at the world in my own, naive bubble, but realized it was not. There are always things that hurt, even though they are not big enough to torture you. When your parents do not share the same opinion, sometimes, it does hurt. When it feels like they do not understand you, it does sadden you. When you realize how friends come and go, it does wake you up. Just because you are family, does not mean they will unconditionally like you.

Little things like these do wake you up. At least, it woke me up. Therefore, if you are thinking this is a romantic, fluff story, I will have to disappoint you. In this story, I have and will be putting things in of my own, things I have experienced. That is why this time the main character is so precious to me. It does not necessarily means that everything the main character experiences, is something that I have also experienced in the exact same way. Sometimes it may be, sometimes I just wrote it different, and sometimes I took it from one of my friends. That is also why it is sometimes scary for me to write this, but I will still write this with pleasure. That is also why the first two chapters mean a lot to me, even though they may bore some. But maybe you will recognize yourself in it too, and if you do not, maybe you will understand her thoughts. 

I do hope you all enjoy this story, despite everything above. I will do my utmost best to make this a great story! Also, I would like to thanks two great people *getting embarrassed* First is
panda_0_o, who has been giving me a lot of support for this story. Thank you for being so excited, I really felt happy! When I am in this already, might as well promote her stories here, so, go check them out! And second is fayeluccie143, who was willing to give me help when I needed it. Thank you! You two made me so excited to post this story, more than you think, so thank you :D So yeah, shout out for you two keke! *Slaps herself for doing something this embarrassing*

All my biases in one story… Oh boy… XD… Even though two are still missing, but maybe they will appear too keke *quickly shuts * For the poster, I did not know whether to put Kyuhyun on it or not, thinking it may be revealing too much or even give people a wrong impression. But… I think is okay like this… I hope… XD Well, ENJOYYYYY! :D

Tinywings




Preview

(Did not know if posting a preview would reveal too much,but maybe it will wake up some curiosity)

“Jinyoung hyung,” I looked at Taemin as he spoke, “why? Why would you choose someone like her?”

A smirk appeared on my lips as I saw his disapproving expression.

“Taemin-ah, we need a girl, you know that. In order to perfect our flawless group, we need a female companion.”

“I know, I know, I know! But hyung, we need someone who is intelligent, elegant, fast, and most importantly, beautiful. Cho Chunhei will not work, hyung. She did not even understand what you meant when you offered her the place of our third companion.”

I casually shook my head with a grin. As if I would choose the wrong person.

“Taemin, she was able to solve the code on the poker card in just minutes. Without a doubt, she will be our third companion.”

“Hyung, that was such an easy code-” He put his hand up to stop me from telling him the opposite. “Fine, do as you please. However, she just ran away, hyung. You think she will come back again?”

A confident smirk crept on my lips.

“She will. Without a doubt, she will.”

Comments

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nalaboja
#1
ahhhh I just read everything. Your characterization is brilliant!! I love the way you portrayed Taemin (FINALLY! a Taemin who doesn't act like a whiny 6 year old. You probably know what I mean. XD), and though I don't know a thing about the real Jinyoung, he sounds like a cool guy, too. Most importantly, your OC/ main character is someone who can stand as a character of her own, and that's what draws me in the most. As an author who personally invests a ton of time into forming 3D OCs with real, distinct personalities, I appreciate how Chunhei is a person with a past, someone who experiences in-depth emotions with reasons behind them, and not just your typical Mary-Sue or some tragic orphan (there really are just too many cliched stories out there like that; what's worse is that they take away from the stories of that genre that are actually really well-written >.<). Normally, I don't read stories that don't feature my favorite all-time bias as the main character, but I like this story enough to make an exception xD. Great job, and update soon, please~~
fayeluccie143
#2
Poor Chunhei...almost pushed to her limits :(<br />
Good thing that Jinyoung was there... he's still human after all or the reason he understand Chunhei is that because he might had gone through the same before.<br />
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Thanks for the update.
Eliano #3
Pls update soon.
Eliano #4
Don't worry, good luck for your test.
fayeluccie143
#5
Everything regarding Jinyoung and Taemin is still vague for me at the moment...you've succeeded in making their character so mysterious. I feel sorry for Chunhei, i supposed she'll go through a lot of hardship and a lot of pain. But I admire her determination and and her being firm in something that she chose :) Fighting!!!<br />
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Thanks for the update. I'll be waiting for the next. <br />
Eliano #6
Please update soon. <br />
fayeluccie143
#7
Owwww...something to do with the dark world huh?<br />
And Kyu is a genius casino owner? Hmmmmmmmnnn...nice rolefor him, i think it'll suit him well...hehe. <br />
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Nice update :)