PART TWO

What We Once Were
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There is a garden in her face

   Where roses and white lilies blow;

A heavenly paradise is that place,

   Wherein all pleasant fruits do flow:

      There cherries grow which none may buy

      Till “Cherry-ripe” themselves do cry.

 

Those cherries fairly do enclose

   Of orient pearl a double row,

Which when her lovely laughter shows,

   They look like rose-buds filled with snow;

      Yet them no peer nor prince can buy

      Till “Cherry-ripe” themselves do cry.

 

Her eyes like angels watch them still;

   Her brows like bended bows do stand,

Threat'ning with piercing frowns to kill

   All that attempt with eye or hand

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I know it's been longer than usual, and I'm so sorry! I was having a little of a writer's block, but I hope to get the next chapter up next week or so! XOXO

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haruhi19 #1
Chapter 29: Honestly i miss this ㅠㅠ
haruhi19 #2
When will this update :(
haruhi19 #3
Chapter 29: Update this please TT_____________TT
nygdlonehi
#4
Chapter 29: I'm getting pissed off at everyone right now. No one is even making sense. Why the cant dara break off the engagement fast. What the is she waiting for??? For Seunghyun to break it off first and freely tell her to go get her happiness??
Kasshi #5
Chapter 29: bull no one is making a mistake not even jiyong. sanadara's and choi's family are to be blame because in the first place they lied to sandara. they are not the one to decide
haruhi19 #6
Chapter 29: Oh goodie! An update! Even though there was no otp scenes here, ㅠㅠ but the fight scene was good! Choi is playing dirty i see. Im so totaly 99% supporting jiyong in taking dara back bcs honestly i think its time for choi to get his karma..for what he has done years back just bcs dara didnt choose him and his ego stepped upon. I pitty jiyong so much.... He suffered a lot ㅜㅜ especially the circumstances he is in with the affair he and dara has and people keep on reminding their forbidden affair...he and she deserves to be happy lol i mean those two was just being in love what is wrong with that!! Hahahha im exagerating i know but seriously! And about youngbae. Taken he is worried of jiyong for he is one of the few people saw jiyong's state after the incident. I mean the self destructing eras and all. But what does he suggest? What does yb want jiyong to do? Break it off his fling with dara?even knowing it will cause more pain to jiyong? Sit back and let dara marry the very cause of his and her misery bcs of some jealousy and tampered ego? He be tellin jiyong to be smart..to be careful , to really think about his actions and affairs with dara. I cant help but to assume and equate all this and translate as "stay away from dara".... But being away from her will make him more insane! Lol... His and her affair may seem forbidden to other because she is engaged... But the engagement itself is developed from a lie so i dont really see it as valid and pit them as a couple in love....purely manipulated... So still rooting for ji and dara!and please dar please be smart and dont be weak lol.thank you for the update!
mikkydragon #7
Chapter 29: update soon..............
haruhi19 #8
Chapter 28: I know that youngbae has good intentions and but i just hope that somehow, just somehow he's at least gonna be happy and support jiyong on this..thank you for the update! I've long been waiting for this! And oh. I do hope madam park wont ask or beg jiyong to stay away from dara like them korean dramas and cuz really, those two are already in a pile of with their affair and jiyong's insecurities but totaly up to you authornim tho. Lol.Fighting! And happy new year!
mikkydragon #9
Chapter 28: update soon..............
viashmbng #10
Chapter 27: I knew it! Jiyong must be sleeping with top's sister in the past. Wtf.