Mend Up Under The Rain

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Description

Jung Yunho, the man who hated rain way too much, was kind of forced to work together with other man- called Kim Jaejoong due to a certain problem in his father’s company. It was forced; because, in fact Yunho was too much unwilling to work with Jaejoong, who loved rain whole-heartedly.

But Yunho didn’t just hate the latter because he loved the rain way while Yunho hated it.

Yunho and Jaejoong weren’t strangers one with another. They were, once before, shared their past together. And just like other ordinary couples, they had love- and they had fight as well. But sadly, as different as they were, the continuous fight over something finally led them into a separation.

Now that they met again under circumstances, would the fate finally bring them together?


Title : Mend Up Under The Rain

Author : 5starssupporter
Characters : Jung Yunho, Kim Jaejoong, Shim Changmin [side], Kim Junsu [side], Park Yoochun [mentioned (?)]
Pairings : YunJae, MinSu [slight/hinted]
Length : short-chaptered (2... or 3... or 4 chapters?)
Genre : BL (Boys Love), romance, a bit angst (?). AU (Alternate Universe)
Rating : PG-15

DISCLAIMER : The characters belong to themselves; never the company. Plot is always mine.

Author's Note :

This fanfic is originally meant to be a one-shot, requested by one of the saeng of mine; @verver_YJM (am sorry, I don't remember what your AFF account is. LOL. But if you want it to be changed into your AFF account, feel free to ask me~ :3), as a part of our deal over something.
I don't know if this suited her or not, but hope that it won't be too much disappointing (or too boring- yeah it IS boring I guess... but I hope won't be too much.) for her... and for all of you as well. ^^
Happy reading~ and- please comment? /grins shamefully/
 
PS. sorry for the boring description (and so does the foreword)... can't think anything to make it more... related with the story. XD

Foreword

It was morning, it was Sunday, it was raining, and Yunho was awake. The combination itself was enough to make Yunho feeling annoyed already.
After all, Yunho loved to take a rest on Sunday and he didn’t like the rain; drizzle even more.

Not anymore, at least.

***

In the middle of nowhere, stood a man around his age; drenched under the heavy rain. If only Yunho could think logically, maybe he would have left the man all alone. The man was, after all, indeed way too weird- crazy even; for standing there without an umbrella. What kind of a normal person would be willing enough to do that?

However, Yunho just couldn’t move his stare from the other man.

Never once in his life Yunho has seen something as endearing as the sight in front of him.

***

“Why do you always drench yourself under the rain? Aren’t you feeling cold? You’re not a superhero. If you’re sad, you know where my apartment is. You can always come to me,” grumbled Yunho in annoyance; didn't like the fact he just found Jaejoong in front of his apartment, once again soaked under the rain.

“I’m not sad. I just like the rain; can’t I? It calms me down and it also washes away unneeded things,” replied Jaejoong calmly with a shrug.

“So you are sad, right?” said Yunho back while he was placing the towel on the top of Jaejoong's head and ruffling his hair softly.

“Not anymore. Not since I found you,” answered Jaejoong with the smile which Yunho always loved the most.

***

Will you kiss me?
Kiss me under the rain, Yunnie-yah.

5starnables
[Mend Up Under The Rain] -currently on hiatus till i get the mood back. sorry for the troubles. ^^-

Comments

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Bigeast88 #1
Chapter 2: I like ur writing style. The ending sentence is somehow.. beautiful. :3
vranzeezqa #2
Chapter 2: I like the way you tell the story and the sentences you make..
So great...
Please continue this story :)
mmm13579 #3
I hope you continue this story, it's beautiful :) ...thanks for sharing!
ReitaSama
#4
Chapter 2: what a tease~
im dying to know more abt yun n jae~
>,<
ververthesecret #5
Chapter 2: The story seems to not going on the way I thought.
I expected something more like angst than this, where YunJae were trying to avoid their past, being cold when the other was around; or even... fighting, leading each other a pretty dance, exchanging angry words, getting each other's blood up...
But no! Half of the chapter is Yunho's sweet memories about Jaejoong, and in the second half, he admitted that he's still in love with his ex (oh Changmin helped but, Yunho himself had thought he was falling for Jaejoong again before too). And the scene where they made a phone call, I feel as if they were... flirting. Lol. About Jaejoong's gestures... um I've smelt this way since the first chapter and after the update I could see it even more clearly. It feels like he was playing a trick on Yunho and the relationship between them (WTH >_<)
So in short, I'm a bit disappointed because of the speed. I'm not saying they were getting back together to fast (obviously there were still many stones in their way left). Just... like they were getting everything off their hands and so ready to be back.

And you haven't revealed why they broke up yet lol. But what, "this man"? I expected something came from the inside of their relationship. Well something objective such as money, bad habits or negative thoughts (do you understand what I mean? XD).

And I realized that I prefer reading present scenes than reading flashbacks XD. I just want some thoughts of the past to drop by their minds when something reminded them, like that XD. So it'd feel more bittersweet ♥

After all, it doesn't mean I don't like this chapter ^___^ I especially like your writing style here. The count-down part is the best!! I adore the way those words are chosen there ♥ (though I had taken a look at it before hihi). Yunho's habit is so cute too >3<. And Changmin, how he interrupted his hyung, ahh shy huh? XD

OK, reached the limit alr XD
ververthesecret #6
Chapter 1: YunJae obviously were still in love -- or at least, still had special feelings for each other O_O Jaejoong still called his ex by a lovely nickname. And look at Yunho, oh please, it was like everything about Jaejoong could remind him of their old days, he remembered every single thing (his "You haven’t changed; not at all.", omg this thought said his heart all out ♥); even asked to be called like their sweet past; even realized that he just couldn't hate Jaejoong like he should've done, couldn't lie to his heart anymore. They didn't just accept a cooperation despite whatever fight and/or misunderstanding that had made them apart; they still cared a lot; and the way they could read each other's mind..... There was so much love in their hearts. Gosh what the heck was keeping them apart >___<

It feels so bittersweet seeing my YunJae being like that T_T How beautiful the loving cares are; but yet so sad when they cannot being together.

Your choice surprised me a bit too :D "Frozen-healthy-food company"? Usually (I mean in most fics) it is a car-producing company, or real estate company, IT company or such -- well, something sounds big and expensive, making feels of their huge assets XD A frozen-healthy-food company sounds more simple, more practical and closer to reality :D Really creative XD

How about MinSu? Awwwww should I feel pity for Changminnie? Junsu got married with an woman omg O_O
And Yoochun too, would he make his appearance? Thank to him, YunJae had got their love begun a few years ago. Maybe he would help them getting back together again? :)) I hope so ^^

Waiting for an update ~~~~ ^^
ververthesecret #7
Just read the description + the foreword and decided to comment right way ^_____^ putting comments is never my habit, so you can see how excited I am ^____^

You know, you just accidentally touch almost all of my favorites. I won't talk about the separation (well it's my grasp, however), but besides, angst mixed with romance (I can see it in the very first words), officers, being under pressure (from the summary)..... I haven't told you they're all my favs, right? And somehow, you know. As if there was a telepathic communication, or you could read my mind >3<

You do make me curious, do make me fond of this fic despite having just read some first sentences. My YunJae heart is fluttering, quivering, trembling; full of hopes.

Thanks so much, I have never thought our crazy deal would lead to this prize ❤
I'm moving to the first chapter, see you later ^_^
QueensCassiopeia
#8
Chapter 1: I'm still curious about why they break up at the first place? And why did Yunho think he needed to hate on Jae?
Yunho hates rain, is it because Jaejoong's love for the rain? Because rain reminds him about Jae...

Reading Yunho's point of view, I can very much tell that he's still in love to Jae, lol even when he thought about lawyer for his company product case, he remember a lawyer who used to cheer him up, smile, hug and sing for him.

I'm glad when they meet again, Yunho chose to stay at his professional side of him and accept Jae as the new lawyer because at least now they can became friends, right? Even though we know, Yunho actually didn't want to be just friend with Jaejoong.
Hopefully we can see them mend up their relationship soon :)

Fighting, twin!!! Waiting for the next chap :)