Mess We've Made

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Description

 
Just look at the mess we've made.
We both know that we can't stay.
 
"I'm sorry but I can't stay."
 

Foreword

"What I didn't know was, she was already giving up on me..."

 
 
"I am aware on how our relationship was on rocks for a long time now..."
 
 
Everything we ever had now is ending...
 
 
 
 
 
 
AN: annyeong! :) I'll be writing a short story for you all but don't worry, I'll still finish my first FF which is Project Happiness. Hope you'll like this too.
 
This story was based from AJ Rafael's song, Mess We've Made.
 
Please and thank you! And oh~ sorry in advanced for the grammatical errors and the lack of descriptive sense...
 
If you haven't heard the song yet, here's a link, you may want to listen to it too ^.^
 
 

omo~ I'd like to thank Special Aces Graphic Shop for a very wonderful poster! Yup, you see that everyone? That poster was made by vksujusnsd! Hihi. Thank you very much for the wonderful poster! I really love it <3 Chingus~ If you want an awesome poster like this, please do pay them a visit. You might want to check them out ;) Thank you~! <3 *Click on the photo; I've linked their page.^.^)



 
 
 
DISCLAIMER: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of my imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
 
*heart heart <3
*bbuing bbuing*

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kang2noh
#1
i keep reading and re-reading this. thank you very much!
JDarambles
#2
Chapter 3: Aaaaah.... reading again, why must this be so sad? huhu... I hope there's a sequel to this where they would work it out. They obviously love each other so much. More LuDara one-shots chuseyo..huhu. Thank you for this!
jhazza_min #3
Chapter 3: ohmyghad! this is so sad... i feel like crying bec. of this story :c
chiruka
#4
Chapter 3: uwaaaaaaaaaaaa why is the story so sad~ huhu T.T
cottonmouth95 #5
Chapter 3: i cried... ludara :(
dara-ish
#6
heartbreaking ludara but everything happens for a reason. they need to separate ways to find each other again. :-(
JDarambles
#7
Chapter 3: I cant deal with a sad LuDara. They are just MFEO to be even breaking up, but then that happens in real life, but it looks like they'll get back when they figure out what are the things that are really important for them. TT^TT
minnsong
#8
Chapter 3: Oh my god. Noooooo I cannot!! Please make a sequel, authornim. Make them happy together? Huhu. ;A; so saaaad.
ShaiRa1009 #9
Chapter 3: woah!! i dont expect that but its great tho thinking what best for each other
AeriSphnx
#10
Chapter 3: What the?!?!? My heart! Omo! This is so sad! T.T