Mess We've Made

Mess We've Made
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Everything we ever had now is ending I didn't wanna have to say our goodbye Baby, It's best we let this go Trust me   It's better if we just let this come crashing down There's no way to fix it now We're lost in the crowd and our love will soon decay Just look at the mess we've made We both know that we can't stay I'm sorry but I can't stay     The rain was pouring hard, as if the heavens were sympathizing with the two souls who were both broken.   Luhan and Dara were sitting on a bench at the park where they first met. They were holding different umbrellas. Both sitting at each corner, diverting their gaze to their surroundings.   "I'm sorry, Dara. Please. Please? Give me another chance. I'll take a week off. Let's go and have a vacation. Please, Dara?" Luhan pleaded Dara who was now sitting close to her. She tried her best not to look at him but she did. She caressed Luhan's face. He was crying already and finally, tears were forming in her eyes.   "Luhan, I'm so sorry. I am not asking you to put me as your priority but-"   "I'll change, Dar. Please. I will learn to balance things well. Please, I'm so sorry. Please?" Luhan removed her hand from his face, dropped the umbrella, and held her hand tightly then he kissed it. Dara was crying now too. She was broken to see Luhan so frustrated and sad. He was never like this. Luhan was indeed a very smart man, he had always looked sharp. But now, his eyes were puffy and red. Dropping her umbrella, she caressed
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kang2noh
#1
i keep reading and re-reading this. thank you very much!
JDarambles
#2
Chapter 3: Aaaaah.... reading again, why must this be so sad? huhu... I hope there's a sequel to this where they would work it out. They obviously love each other so much. More LuDara one-shots chuseyo..huhu. Thank you for this!
jhazza_min #3
Chapter 3: ohmyghad! this is so sad... i feel like crying bec. of this story :c
chiruka
#4
Chapter 3: uwaaaaaaaaaaaa why is the story so sad~ huhu T.T
cottonmouth95 #5
Chapter 3: i cried... ludara :(
dara-ish
#6
heartbreaking ludara but everything happens for a reason. they need to separate ways to find each other again. :-(
JDarambles
#7
Chapter 3: I cant deal with a sad LuDara. They are just MFEO to be even breaking up, but then that happens in real life, but it looks like they'll get back when they figure out what are the things that are really important for them. TT^TT
minnsong
#8
Chapter 3: Oh my god. Noooooo I cannot!! Please make a sequel, authornim. Make them happy together? Huhu. ;A; so saaaad.
ShaiRa1009 #9
Chapter 3: woah!! i dont expect that but its great tho thinking what best for each other
AeriSphnx
#10
Chapter 3: What the?!?!? My heart! Omo! This is so sad! T.T