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In the future, individuals have the choice of undergoing a sort of "surgery" known as Augmenting. Augments, as they are known, are physically stronger, more agile, more intelligent, and more durable than the average human. These individuals are trained to fight against the rising crime in the chaotic city known as Seoul, but also enjoy a life of luxury in exchange for sacrificing their bodies for such a noble cause. 

 

Tensions are rising between the government of Seoul and the Augments when Mari meets Ken, an ordinary boy who dreams of becoming an engineer. As the two become close, Mari realises that the Augments may be hiding something that could change the entire city forever. 

 

Inspired by VIXX's Error

 

Notes: Strong Language, Mature Themes

 

 

Entered Into The Following Contest(s):

 

★彡 Wᴀɴᴅᴇʀʟᴜsᴛ & Sᴛᴀʀᴅᴜsᴛ ミ☆ Cᴏʟʟᴀʙᴏʀᴀᴛɪᴏɴ Mᴜʟᴛɪ-Cᴏɴᴛᴇsᴛ

 

 

◄ᴛʜᴇ ʟɪᴏɴ's ᴅᴇɴ► ᴡʀɪᴛɪɴɢ ᴄᴏɴᴛᴇsᴛ
using the quote prompt, "You were given this life because you are strong enough to live it."  -Robin Sharma"

 

◄ ᴛʜᴇ ʟɪᴏɴ's ᴅᴇɴ ► ɪɴᴛᴇʀɴᴀᴛɪᴏɴᴀʟ ɢɪᴠᴇᴀᴡᴀʏ 
submitted as an entry for the Feb--> March 2016 monthly writing challenge

 

//Placed in Top 5//

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewed By:

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Rated 96/100 by Eunriehyun || read the full review here!

"An amazing storyline! It had action,  love, melodrama,  mystery, and so much more to offer. It gave the reader vivid images of the story."

"Each relationship Mari made was based on trust and true friendship. I could easily view them as your kids next door."

"Well presented and organized.  The tone was good and it was thoughtful."

 

 

 

 

Additional Credits:

A huge thank you to Taerim of Club Nevermore for the amazing poster!

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Foreword

"Saying that I’ll forget you is all a lie that remains in me
Your face spreads throughout my heart again
It hurts even more than before"


"Don't ever forget me, don't ever erase me"

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byuntaeken #1
Chapter 22: huaaa. ur so amazing author-nim. i found myself weeping inside the bathroom and idk this is so great. i swear im going to read all ur stories
kaseume #2
Chapter 23: This story is different from what I usually read. I rarely read angst and vixx stories because I really don't like people dying but I don't know why I kept reading on and on even though I was trying not to press next when I guessed what is going to happen after Ravi's personality change. I'm thankful that I stumbled upon this and this story has me sobbing like there's no tomorrow :,( It's so well-planned that it had me crying starting from chapter 8... omg and I was expecting something to happen or maybe they will successfully escape but the ending huehue ... this is definitely not the kind of story with ambitious and clever scientists or revolutions and political wars but is so emotional that gives me a literal breakdown. I like the fact that this story is short and that though it doesn't have too much twists and turns, it's lovely and touching. I hope to read another fic as good as this one from you, author-nim <3
Light_Archer #3
oh my goodness thank you so much for your feedback! I'm so happy you enjoyed the story, I worked very hard on it. im so evil hehe >:D
yyscupcake #4
Chapter 22: I AM TEARING UP AND LITERALLY IS DROWNING IN MY OWN POOL OF TEARS THIS IS VERY SAD AND HEARTWRENCHING OHMYGOD THE BEST KEN'S FIC I HAVE EVER READ NOW I FEEL LIKE RUNNING TO KEN AND HUG HIM AND FEED HIM. YOU DID A VERY GOOD JOB!!! KEEP UP ALL THE GOOD WORK AND THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE STORY ❤️
AngeliqueXDevilyque #5
Chapter 9: Omg this chapter is horrid to read while reading error:'(
Light_Archer #6
oh my goodness thank you so much! <333333 As a starlight, I'm so happy to be on the list ; v ; im so happy you enjoyed!
suzyelf #7
Hi. Your story is added in the Epic List of VIXX Fanfic Rec! Thank you for recommending your story. I enjoyed the world and tension. Keep it up. :)
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/861759/
lanouveau #8
Chapter 6: I HAVE to say it, because as a reader I'm not sure if in the future, Astrology is suddenly given legit credence so that it becomes a subject for study (which should be explained in the story, since it is unusual) OR... more probable, I think you really meant Astronomy. ;-) I had to say it, because as a reader, it takes me out of the story for a moment, and you're a good enough writer to want to master how nuance impacts your readers. I'm liking the story. Thank you for writing!
-Anita #9
Hi! ^^ I just read this story in one sitting and while it was very different from what I expected, I really enjoyed it. That's why I've posted it on my recommendations blog (vixxaffrec.tumblr.com). However, if you'd like me to take it down, or notice a mistake, please let me know. Also, do you happen to know the (rough) word count of this story? If that'd be the case, I'll add it to the post later. ^^

Sidenote: I noticed a small spelling mistake in your description. It says 'oridinary' instead of 'ordinary'. ;)

But yeah, I really liked this story. It had a number of twists and turns I didn't expect and was overall well written. c:
heclgehog #10
Chapter 23: Once Mari got shot I legit thought she was gonna wake up in Ken's body lololol
But good job, you got me sittin' here sobbin' like a fool over a fictional boy's death.
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