Cringe Worthy Pt 1
A Fan Fiction Writer's GuideLuhan gazed into Sehun's eyes lovingly, bringing his hand up to his husband's cheek. The latter held on so tightly, almost desperately, that it was like Luhan was the only thing tying him down to such a messed up world; why was such one made with sickness, disease, and death? Why couldn't Luhan stay forever? It seemed that day as Luhan lay there, condition slowly deteriorating, God had forgotten about his beloved creations.
"Don't cry, Sehunnie," Luhan croaked out, wiping the stray tear that fell down Sehun's face. "I'll still be with you, just not physically." (a/n: omg Sehunnie don't cry. Luhan is still there! Stupid life)
"Why did it have to be you?" Sehun cried out, choking on his own saddness. "I can't live without you!" He squeezed his husband's hand tighter, feeling the cold wedding ring almost slip off.
"I love you, my Sehunnie..." Luhan whispered, pulling Sehun towards him for one last kiss. (a/n: omg I'm crying now) When they parted lips, Sehun felt his lover's hand go limp and the only sound that filled his head was the single beep before the line went flat and Luhan ceased his short breaths(a/n:nooooo! Luhan!); his life was cut short at the age of 30.
LESSON OF THE DAY: NEVER PUT AN AUTHOR'S NOTE IN THE MIDDLE OF A STORY, AS IF YOU HADN'T WRITTEN IT. LIKE WTH. YOU MADE THIS HAPPEN FOR YOUR CHARACTERS. IF YOU WANTED A HAPPY STORY, THEN MAKE ONE YOU 'TARD. ESPECIALLY NOT DURING AN ANGST MOMENT. LIKE "THE HELL, MAN?"
Btw, I did well up slightly when writing this.
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