Hate

The Broken Scar
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"No xiao Lu! Don't break up with me! Please...what have I done wrong? Tell me! I can change. For you..." Sehun cried out. "Stop calling me that. It disgusted me. I'm just playing with you. That's it so please now just back off my life." Luhan pushed sehun off him while the latter stumbled backwards. If only sehun had look at luhan's eyes... If only he could hear the hurt in his eyes... That nightmare started all this. The bully. If only you know.,Hun...

"Look the girly deer is here" sehun laugh out, catching everyone's attention in the hall. Now  the bubbly,childish and lovely sehun was gone. His feelings for luhan has been replace by hate. Since he was rich as his parents own thousands of hotel in Seoul, no one dare to make fun of him after the break up. Now he was cold, heartless.

Sehun smirk as luhan look up, looking at him in the eyes. Sehun rolled his eyes and walk past him, pushing him by the shoulder making the smaller stumbled back, causing him to fall. The hall fill up with laughter. Students were throwing him insults. Idiot. Ugly . Sehun treated you like his princess yet you do this to him. Luhan sigh while getting up. It was nothing to be surprised of. Such things like this happen every day in his life now. Sometimes he wonders if this will not happen if only he didn't break up with sehun...if only he could understand. If only I fight for him...

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aillis
#1
the story seems interesting but you should capitalise Sehun and Luhan's names in the foreword : )
MyaReen
#2
Chapter 14: off 'growl'
shiho55
#3
Chapter 12: Oh my gosh who's this miss!!!! She better not break my HUNHAN!!!
MyaReen
#4
Yo wassup! new reader want to see my story? Lol if u want ~ anyway this story is daebak 'thumbs up' hope u can update
dellusionallady #5
Um what about for music
battle scar- huy sebastian ft lupe
lego house - ed sheeran
Heart attack by exo would be cool too like i think it matches the blurb. Like an action trailer lesding to the scene in the bathroom?

Please dont go - kwill
stay with me - sam smith (I think it matches what sehun thought at first when they broke up)

As for an app, the video editor on samsung is prettygood but its moreover like windows media one. Im not sure, u can try just typing in 'video editor' on the app store or play store

Haha sorry thats all I can think of :)
Fighting! Keep up the good work xx have a lovely day

PS. just wanted to ask, did u get the poster I sent u for this fic? I was just wondering. Its totally ok if u didnt wanna use it but if it was lost or anything like it didnt get to you, then I can send it again :)
I sent it like in january I think
PuUppyyto #6
Chapter 10: Awwww .... I want moreeeeee... So flufffyyyy ╰(*´︶`*)╯♡
Rainbow_Spirit
#7
Love love love this valentine special! Sehun can be soo sweet sometimes ;)
shiho55
#8
Chapter 10: That was SO FREAKING CUTE!!!!!!

Update soon ♥♥♥♥
and Happy Valentine's day ♥♡♥♡♥
dellusionallady #9
Chapter 9: Exolattee-nim
please update! !! Pali !!!
Haha we r here fOr support. I hope ur doing well ~ thank you for writing hard xoxo
have a good day
Rainbow_Spirit
#10
You gotta update moreeeeeeee.I really like this though a lil drama could spice up a bit.I want the next chapter alreadyyy