Once in a Lifetime

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There are four main directions in our lives: north, west, south, and east...

Where do you want to go first-- to the north where there is a promising future between stagnant complexity,to the west where the sun sets and only the moon and stars befriend you, to the south with unknown destination to find a real home between the constant monochrome life,or to the east where the sun rises and blinds your eyes with its radiance?

I'm here, and I'll be your guide for the rest of the adventure...

Foreword

This is another project formed by my imagination

Gonna give this story a shot to...

A Freedom Writing Contest

Hope you like this also :)

Actually this is just a four-shot...

Happy reading and enjoy ^^

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velvetmajesty #1
uhm...corrections on your description:

There are four main directions in our lives: north, west, south, east.

Where do you want to go first-- to the north where there is a promising future between stagnant complexity,to the west where the sun sets and only the moon and stars befriend you, to the south where there is an unknown destination,or to the east where the sun rises and blinds your eyes with its radiance?

I will be your guide.

--uhm... i think the phrase 'to find a real home between the boring life' is a bit awkward. try making another phrase. and...i'm sorry if i'm being like this. it's just that i want your description to improve.
velvetmajesty #2
uhm...corrections on your description:

There are four main directions in our lives: north, west, south, east.

Where do you want to go first-- to the north where there is a promising future between stagnant complexity,to the west where the sun sets and only the moon and stars befriend you, to the south with unknown destination to find a real home between the boring life,or to the east where the sun rises and blinds your eyes with its radiance?

I will be your guide.

--i'm not sure with the dash, but i think it's better like that. if you mind.
i hope your fic will be good.
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