Chapter 4

''The Others''
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[Back at the airport]

[Ayu POV]

"Wait a minute? What is on 'the other side'? What happened to that guy Seven? Why was he banished to be reborn or reincarnate as a human being? And why is that bad? Kinda twisted and douchey shading on humans! And what about the ice-cream guy, Seunghyun hyung? How does he fit in the story? Can we renamed him to something else? It will be confusing as that ice-cream hyung and the new kid share the same name. And that Daesung kid? Is there a tragic love story somewhere? And gosh I hate that jerk Jiyong! Don't know why Elder Gummy was nice to him. Same with that Elder Jae Wook. Both are too nice. Same with the Headmaster Yang. Don't get me started on that stick-in-mud Elder Hwang? He is an even though it is probably his job to enforce discipline. But still? He could lighten up abit!" Ayu rattled on.

"Wow! Slow down Ayu-chan! Mr Mrig chuckled heartily. All in good times. I like to pace myself when telling a story. The next few chapters might shed some light to some of your questions. Those are very good questions by the way. I am pleased you were so attentive to such details." He said.

"Thank you. I can be a little OCD at times. Abit anally retentive towards the smallest minute details. At times it can be a little overbearing in weight. Claustrophobic even." I clarified.

"Well, I only stopped because to check on you and see if you are okay. You looked a little pale, like you are losing blood. Are you anemic by the way? Would you like me to get you something to drink?" Mr Mrig asked.

I politely declined at first but Mr Mrig was adamant in getting me something to drink and thus I relented. While waiting for him to return from the vending machine, I looked around the lounge area. Most of the passengers were asleep. I continued to massage the throbbing pain on my left wrist. I looked at my white watch and my mouth wa

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PenguinLOvers772
#1
Chapter 9: urm ...... just a say if you didn't mind ....
you wrote it "Jiyong pov" so of course readers will read like they are Jiyong himself. You don't have to put 'he' because it's his own pov; Jiyong is talking in his heart so it is not necessary.
do you get me? I'm sorry for this out of the blue action but just wanna share something useful between authors. Hope you won't be offended. :3
btw, poor Jiyong ... finishing that work is surely tiring .. xD
dan1234 #2
Chapter 8: this story is different, and i really like the story, and you've done really
good job so please continue!! ;)
PenguinLOvers772
#3
Chapter 8: are you sure that he is hospitalized again? sometimes those fanaccounts are not that right.
but if yes, I pray for his recovery then ... poor Seungri. :/

btw, I still can't grasp where this story is leading but it is interesting indeed. :D
PenguinLOvers772
#4
Chapter 5: you're story is one of a kind. xD
PenguinLOvers772
#5
hmm .... sound interesting.
I'll give it a shot then! :D

btw, it's nice to see you again. ^^
whatsoeverlife #6
Chapter 3: Woww. This is the new. I feel that, it was setting like 'harry potter', Hogwart....!! I'm a big fan of harry potter. Definitely my liking...XD
phoebe94
#7
Chapter 1: Oh, welcome back friend. I miss you so much, and your story too ><
I was wondering where have you been and now you give me a new story with a interesting prologue
Please update soon, you make me curious