EXILE

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LISTEN TO: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=htAGR6UnJ6 as you read.

They live amongst us, these creatures.

Outcasts. Monsters.

Society deems them abnormal, harmful, mutated, fearsome.

They get punished, they get excluded, discriminated against, oppressed.

But they've had enough.

 

"Welcome to EXO."


"The government listens to the people to stay in power. We ask for an agreement. We ask for harmony. But the people want us dead. And the government listens to the voices of the people. But we, we aren't considered people. We aren't humans. We are outlaws."


"They aren't curses. We aren't cursed. We are not abnormal, we are not freaks. We are special. Remember, the humans only say these things because they fear us. Because we posses abilities beyond their imaginations."


"They are building their own army. They are building an army of extraordinary people. Every single feared being is being trained, groomed, tested, into an army of super-soldiers."


"You once failed to protect us. When we asked for help you abandoned us. You didn't care, you didn't listen. If our cries can't reach you, then our actions can."


"You come at us with your man-made weapons. You come at us with your guns, and your bullets and your knives. But we come at you with the forces of the universe. And along with that- a raw, passionate hatred."


"You humans call us monsters. But stop for a moment to take a look at yourselves. You are no less of a monster than we are."

Foreword

DISCLAIMER: I do not own Exo, neither do i own any song used, or any of the powers used for the characters.

WARNING: DO NOT COPY ANY IDEAS OR THE PLOT, IF IT IS SIMILAR TO YOURS IT IS PURELY COINCIDENTAL

NOTE: Heavily influenced and inspired by Xmen 

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ExoLover2206 #1
Chapter 5: The time and the names of the people in the story may be a little confusing to me but it makes more sense the further I read. The information is a bit overwhelming but I can sense the effort put into doing the research. Overall, a wonderful story with an intriguing plot. :D
laionnoax
#2
Chapter 6: OK now I am a little confused but looking forward for new updates,,plz plz plz tell us the namees of the characters.
laionnoax
#3
Chapter 5: I am 100% sure that gust is Sehun....lol cause gust is you that swirling kind of wind and Sehun has air to controls...so yeah,and that lady teacher is the main one right and the man with her is Kai cause he was just behind her out of no where and and these two are the triple x gene,right...hehehehe,just my own view...anyways great story but seriously secret named
dawnxiamara #4
Chapter 6: I'm reading a story and learning something at the same time. I find it a lot entertaining and educational. Isn't it awesome?
lovegirl098
#5
Chapter 6: Is she the one who is one of the teachers?
KazzieT #6
Chapter 6: I suprisingy really enjoyed this story so far! tbh I'm not all that fond of the jumping to different times and places style of writing but the way you write this makes it more mysterious which compliments this story!

No complaint atm other than...
WHY
MUST
YOU
KEEP
THEIR
NAMES
SO
SECRET?
Most stories give almost all the names in the first two chapters but...then again this isn't really that tyical of a story is it? Good Work and Hwaiting! And don't worry too much when your school starts. It might be hard for you to update so just focus on your studies if you get busy!
dawnxiamara #7
Chapter 5: Oh my... I've learned so much today with all the scientific explanations of the different powers. I've watched XMen, teenage mutant ninja turtles and such and but your explanations made me realize that reality and being reel is somewhat intertwined with your explanation of the different powers. It's fun reading with the introduction of the student's different powers.....
KazzieT #8
Chapter 5: Is it bad that I recognised the Greek alphabets? Lol I feel like I've learnt more about mutants in those two chapters compared to talking to my xmen crazy friend...

And here's a joke: What do you call the power that a triple x gene mutant has?
A super power.
*runs away and hides*
That. Was lame. XD
lovegirl098
#9
Chapter 5: I offically love you for putting Chang jo and Ricky in here! And is Jeno the Sm the Rookies Jeno?