How Did You? Show!!!

Summer Like No Other

Hi readers! Here's Chapter 6...in this chapter I'm trying to write in a different way from my other chapters! Tell me in the comments section if this way is easier for you to read or you like this way or the other way better k? Enjoy! :D

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*The next day*

"Morning Show" I greeted my brothers lazily as I stuffed a piece of bread into my mouth.

"Morning lazy head" he said.

"Hey! I'm not a lazy head! I'm just tired from yesterday" I said.

"Oh~so you're tired from kissing and fooling around with Aaron~" he said with a teasing tone

"WHAT?!!!! H-how-how did-did you~" I stammered

"How did I know?" he asked

"Well~let see, I was carrying the cookies into the kitchen and greeted the Yans last night when I realized that you're not with me. I was going to call you but then I saw Aaron attacked you with his lips so I decided to leave you guys alone. And then after dinner, I saw you and Aaron again fooling around in the pool. And being such a nice, good, responsible, and understanding big brother as I am. I again decided to leave you guys alone. Why do you think I walked home alone last night my dearest sister?" he said

"So that's why you leave me alone last night! And FYI!!!!! That is so NOT true! There is NOTHING and I mean it NOTHING going on between me and Aaron! So don't you dare tell anyone about what you saw last night or else...you'll regret it BIG BROTHER!" I warned him. I am so not letting the chance of me and George being to together disappear because of what happened last night.

"O-ok..." he said with a scared and shocked face.

"Harh~" I sight.

It's all Aaron's fault. Why did he do that? Luckily only Show saw that or else I'm so going to kill him. I was stll scolding Aaron to myself when "ni shuo wo sha, sha zai shang zhi dong ai zi ji de ren" my phone rang.(her ringtone is Wo Men Dou Sha by Rainie Yang btw :) I looked at the caller ID and it said Aaron. Aaron? Why is he calling me this early in the morning. Well, it eleven in the morning already but it's early for me especialy during SUMMER!

*Phone Convo*

GuiGui: "Hello?" I answered

Aaron: "Hi Gui, me and George's throwing a party tonight! Want to come?" he asked

GuiGui: "Party?Tonight?George?" I asked

Aaron: "Yes! So you're coming?" he asked

GuiGui: "Of Course I'm coming!" I said excitely

Aaron: "Alright then! See you tonight babe"

GuiGui: "EWWWW!!! Don't call me that! I am NOT your babe!" I yelled.

I can hear him chuckled from the other end.

GuiGui: "What are you laughing about?" I said getting mad

Aaron: "Nothing...Bye...babe!" he said

GuiGui: "Hey! Aaron! I said don't call me babe!!!" I shouted but it was too late he already hung up the phone

*End of Phone Convo.*

"OMG! OMG! OMG! I finally get to see George again!" I squeals with excitement after I hung up the phone

"Hmmmmm....what should I wear? What should I wear?" I mummbles to myself until I came across a beautiful simple purple dress.

"OH.MY.GOSH!!! This one's it! It's....PERFECT! Just wait George, I won't let you disappear this time!

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So do you like this kind of writing better than the old one or the old one is better?

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jeanne007 #1
nice ending :)
sweetghost #2
it's been a long time since I read your story,<br />
OMG i missed a lot of things in here already..<br />
anyway I love the ending but like bubble said we want more<br />
Guilun moments..hehe.. looking forward for more<br />
Guilun story that you are going to right. :)
-dreamcatcherx
#3
Kyaa I just finished reading this and I love it <3 I wish there was a sequel, I feel like watching pi li mit again now xD
Bubble
#4
Excuse Me?? Can you tell me what did I just read up there?? <br />
Are you not kidding me, are you?? how the hell why did you end it like that? >_< <br />
Are you running a high fever? eat too much turkey? or does you brain cells are lacking of vitamins?? >:[ <br />
I am complaining here .. it's not that I don't like your story XD but HECK!! what a rush ending -.- only one KISS and it's finished?? NOOO!! how come? why? <br />
I need MORE MORE MORE guilun moments, sweet KISSING scenes/ passionate KISS or some bed scenes WOULD be highly appreciate XD XD HAAHA<br />
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PS: <br />
Did I just scare you a little bit? :P lol <br />
Well!! I am just kidding ke?? :p don't take it to heart ^^ <br />
I might not be here this week -.- <br />
Anyways, congrats^^ you just done another good job :DD (PPS: Yesh!! how I wish you have more guilun moments XP )<br />
--fengus
#5
I'm late!!! TT____________________TT<br />
Nice ending!!<br />
AH-HA!! I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT WAS ALL AN ACT!! ;D<br />
Ehehehehehe I really liked this fanfic!! i'm going to miss it~~<br />
Just like Pi Li MIT~~ /___\<br />
hey! I'll support ALL your fan fics!! XDXD<br />
You're one of my number 1 authors!!!<br />
Hope you'll keep writing more!!
Humble-Goody2shoes
#6
waah!!! i'm so late!!! paboya!! i like the end!! good job!!!!!<br />
love it! **standing ovation while clapping** =0
dramaddict
#7
waaa~ good job on this fanfic!!
azure_bliss
#8
You know what I want to do right now?<br />
Choose between strangling you to death, or thanking you and asking you to be my GuiLun sister...hahaha.....<br />
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I'm soooo conflicted between these two decision....<br />
Can you imagine? Oh, BTW, You can answer me back privately, love your story and again, sorry for not commenting in such a long time! :)
azure_bliss
#9
Gui Gui.......Don't hurt yourself.....heh......I want to cry right now!
azure_bliss
#10
I prefer the gray one, it's cute cutie cute!