Deception

The Son & The Beast

She was beautiful. It was hard to believe that old man had helped create such a pretty thing. As Minho laid eyes on her, he was certain she would be the one. She would break his curse and free him from his torment.

She was young and tall and everything he expected her to be. He wanted to waste no time. He wanted to tell her everything about himself. He wanted to shower her with gifts and affection. He wanted to find the key that would open her heart and make her love him.

He could do it. He would do. After all, she was his now. She would have to love him, unless she wanted to be trapped in that existence with him.

The moment Daevy left the mansion and the doors shut him out, she yanked her hand out of his.

Among her fear and sorrow, there was defiance. Naeun wasn't a timid, weak child. She had a fire to her, which he only liked all the more.

"Finally," Kibum said, breaking the palpable silence in the room. The magician leisurely paced around, sizing their new companion up. "Eh...she's cute enough."

Naeun narrowed her eyes at the magician dangerously.

"Kibum," Minho said, with his tone reprimanding. He offered Naeun one of his smiles, using a charm he had been unable to practice in years. "Ignore him. You're very beautiful, Naeun."

"What do you want from me?" she asked bluntly. Her voice had a hardness to it now that her father was gone.

He opened his mouth to speak, but stopped himself, not sure how to go about explaining everything to her. Her father must have told her about his curse already, but he didn't know how much she knew. He didn't want to frighten her too soon.

"I don't want anything from you. There will be no services or obligations required of you. I just need a woman. That is why you're here."

"You need a woman for what though?"

Kibum chuckled and Minho suddenly wished he wasn't there.

"Only a woman can free me from my curse."

"How?" She certainly wasn't shy with her questions.

"In time, I will tell you."

"And until then?"

He stepped closer and touched a loose strand of her long brown hair, while still giving her his charming smile. "Until then, I'll give you all the comforts and amenities that your father never could. Whatever your heart desires, you will have it. This mansion will be your castle, and I will be your king--"

She knocked his hand away, before shoving him back with a strength that surprised him. "Get away from me, you lech."

Minho stumbled back. She certainly wasn't the sweet daughter he expected. She didn't match Daevy's meek description at all.

"Wait a minute..." Kibum said slowly. He stepped closer to Naeun, who stared him down, unafraid. Confused, Minho looked to Kibum. The magician's face fell. "You're not his daughter, are you?"

She set her jaw defiantly. "No, I'm not...I'm his son."

Minho's hope shattered in an instant. "What?!" he screamed. He lunged at the imposter and grabbed him by the front of his dress. He tore it open just enough to confirm his assertion. He really was a man.

He shoved him to the floor, then Kibum. "Bring that old bastard back!"

Kibum ran out the doors to do as he said, but returned not two seconds later. "He's already past the gate. He's gone."

He had tricked him. The old man tricked him! Every ounce of hope he had drained into despair. There really was no end to his torment. It would continue on, forever.

That boy had stolen the only chance he had.

If he were in his beast form, he might have killed him, he was so angry.

He screamed in rage and went at him again, grabbing hold of his dress and pulling him from the floor. He dragged him through the foyer, and despite his struggling, hauled him down the stairs to the basement.

"Minho!" he heard Kibum calling his name, cautioning him not to do anything rash. He wasn't in the mood to listen.


 

A/N: Uh oh... What will happen next? D: Heh heh heh.

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ehkaren #1
Chapter 30: REALLY...REALLY..NO 2MIN..REALLY..but great story read it to 1:28 AM..LOVE U...
fangrlxbecky19 #2
Chapter 30: I loved this. It made me feel so happy... DO YOU NOT SHIP THO LIKE WHAT WHY ISN'T 2MIN TOGETHER AS LOVERS eh, it's your choice. This needs more views. and subs. and upvotes.
Kathyia
#3
Chapter 30: It was really great story but I'm a little bit sad because of lack of real 2min - I mean 2min as lovers. I think you developed story enough to show that in the end they can be together as a lovers, not friends. To me it's weird that he still wants WANTS Naeun, not wants real love. Taemin is his real love I think... You really shoud make them real lovers, maybe lovers at beginning of their relationship but still... It was intersting and beautiful, but something is missing. I don't feel the thing that you wanted to show readers. For me this story is incomplete because of lack of true love... I really think that they should end up together... Minho doesn't need to be a gay nor Taemin... It's just... Real love isn't choosing, it's a feeling and you know. Everything what characters did was showing 'I LOVE HIM MORE THAN FRIEND' but you make them say 'No, I want your sister/You're like my brother'. It's like you gave some life to characters they started to feel but you had an idea in head and you didn't allow this story to go normal... I didn't want big romance//whatever... Just more SOMETHING in it. Im a little bit disappointed, but Im not saying that story is bad. It's really good and well-written but still... something is missing.
Hope next time you write 2min as lovers, because I really want good authors to write about them kk ^^ Hwaiting!
bluemoonluvkpop0596
#4
Chapter 30: thanks so much for writing this story it was really a pleasure to read ^^
im very happy that everyone has their happy ending and that minho and taemin are still together to enjoy their company i mean they didnt get 'together' but i believe they have developed a special bond indeed ^^ it was awesome watching how their relationship has develop and how so much as change between them :D
Touchstone
#5
Chapter 30: im positive that u could send ur msg about 'true love' to us successfully :)
it was really a beautiful story. im so glad u wrote it n also decided to share it with us all...i should've said some more wonderful things about this story as it's over, but i cant seem to find any perfect words to say here :)
it was a different story. not the stereotypical type ones. that's why i liked it the most. i recently stopped reading thr stories with s and all but i couldn't stop my addiction for stories. but it is kinda hard to find a story here which doesn't contain sth like that. in this case, ur story helped me a lot, a whole lot.
Thanks to you, again :):):)
You Are An Awesome Author, Endelle!
zmusix #6
Chapter 30: .....my heart slightly hurts though it was a good ending. I love all of it so much. I loved the silly little comments that they would say and just it was amazing. I hope after a good break that you will write something new. I will forever love this story and it being my first AFF story that I have ever read that it makes it all the more special to me. Have a wonderful day/night and I hope that you will continue to write in the future and be just as great or even better.
innocentlyevilsammi #7
Chapter 30: I loved this story ;; I'm sad it's done.
I get what you mean though, about the love thing. This was definitely a great 2min story. c:
butausagi #8
Chapter 30: You shouldn't have tagged this as 2min
AusAngel26 #9
Chapter 30: *Quiet tears* Its over..... such a awesome story, happy with the end, kinda leaves it open enough for us die hard 2min fans, I will miss this story, and will have to get back to again in the future and reread it. I want to write more at the moment, but I don't have the right words, but you know my thoughts, I have made sure to write at least something each chapter you have put up. Give yourself a break and be back fresh and new with another perfect story soonish.
kaiminIN #10
Chapter 30: Well,its completed. It was nice.the ending OK .they will be living as neighbors,,,friends. That's completely fine. I can say it was an amazing story..