The Uncomfortable Feeling

The Son & The Beast

He was two days late. As much as Taemin was trying not to, he was starting to worry.

Sometimes his father would be a little late coming back from the market. Things would distract him, he'd lose track of time, and he'd show up at home eight hours later than he was supposed to. It happened often. Two days was a little ridiculous though. His father wasn't that absent-minded.

He had tried to assure his brother and sister that everything was fine, but even he wasn't believing it anymore. Something must have happened to their father. Good or bad, something happened.

"That's it!" Jongin said, breaking the uncomfortable silence that was between the three. They were trying to act like everything was normal, which resulted in them not speaking to each other. After all, they couldn't speak without mentioning the fact that their father was missing.

Taemin turned from the stove to face his younger brother, and his sister who was setting the table.

"One of us needs to go find him," Jongin said, "Something could have happened to him on the road. We need to find out."

"But it's almost night," Taemin said.

"All the more reason we should go," Naeun replied, "I don't think I can stand another night worrying over dad. What if he's hurt? Or worse?"

"Even if it was safe out there, how could we find him in the dark? We could travel the entire road to the market and miss him."

"Taemin, we have to do something," Jongin said, even more adamant now that he had the support of their sister. "Naeun's right, we can't sit around and wait another night."

Taemin knew how strongly they felt and how strongly they were worried. He felt the same, but as much as he wanted to find their father, he was more worried about his siblings' safety. That was why he wouldn't let them travel the road at night with him. He would go to find their father alone.

He was about to tell them as much, when a loud knock sounded at their door.

Naeun immediately went to answer it and her brothers followed behind. She unlocked the door and, as if in answer to their prayers, their father came walking inside.

"Dad!" Naeun exclaimed in relief and joy. She grabbed him in a warm embrace, despite how bedraggled and dirty he was. She only cared that he was home safe.

"Oh sweetie," he said softly as he returned her hug.

"Dad, what happened?" Taemin asked, "It's been two days. We were worried about you."

He didn't answer him. Naeun drew back from their embrace and offered him her loving smile. Daevy father looked at her like he couldn't pull away. Taemin immediately noticed something about him was off.

"I'm alright, kids," he said in the end, despite the sorrow in his expression. "I'm alright."

"What happened?" Jongin asked that time.

"A band of robbers attacked me on the road, the night of the storm."

"Are you alright?" Naeun asked fretfully, looking him over once again just to make sure he wasn't injured. She pulled him away from the door into the kitchen, despite his reassurances.

"A...a man chased them away and was kind enough to put me up for a few nights, till I recovered. They took the wares I was bringing back home, but they didn't get my money." As he said that, he pulled his coin purse from his belt and set it before his children on the table.

"Thank goodness," Jongin said, "The landlord has been buzzing around since you've been gone."

"I made more than enough. You kids will be fine," Daevy said, though Taemin wasn't comforted by the tone he used.

"Get him some soup, Taemin, he's shivering," Naeun ordered. He went to do as she said, while she continued to fret over their father - always acting so much like the mother they had recently lost.

"We'll have to report the robbers to the police," Jongin said, "It shouldn't be too hard to find a bunch of guys with a huge cart of wares, will it?"

"And we'll have to send a gift to the man who helped you," Naeun added, "I could make him a few loaves of bread. You could give them to him on your next trip."

Daevy laughed uncomfortably. "I won't be going to the market for a while, sweetie. They took all my wares, remember?"

"We'll get them back," Jongin assured, "If not, we'll help you make more."

"Yeah," Naeun agreed, "As long as you're here, that's all that matters. We'll all survive."

"Yeah..." Daevy said, looking between all three of his children, as Taemin dished him out a bowl of soup. "You'll all be fine."

And Taemin still couldn't shake the uncomfortable feeling that something was wrong.

 


 

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ehkaren #1
Chapter 30: REALLY...REALLY..NO 2MIN..REALLY..but great story read it to 1:28 AM..LOVE U...
fangrlxbecky19 #2
Chapter 30: I loved this. It made me feel so happy... DO YOU NOT SHIP THO LIKE WHAT WHY ISN'T 2MIN TOGETHER AS LOVERS eh, it's your choice. This needs more views. and subs. and upvotes.
Kathyia
#3
Chapter 30: It was really great story but I'm a little bit sad because of lack of real 2min - I mean 2min as lovers. I think you developed story enough to show that in the end they can be together as a lovers, not friends. To me it's weird that he still wants WANTS Naeun, not wants real love. Taemin is his real love I think... You really shoud make them real lovers, maybe lovers at beginning of their relationship but still... It was intersting and beautiful, but something is missing. I don't feel the thing that you wanted to show readers. For me this story is incomplete because of lack of true love... I really think that they should end up together... Minho doesn't need to be a gay nor Taemin... It's just... Real love isn't choosing, it's a feeling and you know. Everything what characters did was showing 'I LOVE HIM MORE THAN FRIEND' but you make them say 'No, I want your sister/You're like my brother'. It's like you gave some life to characters they started to feel but you had an idea in head and you didn't allow this story to go normal... I didn't want big romance//whatever... Just more SOMETHING in it. Im a little bit disappointed, but Im not saying that story is bad. It's really good and well-written but still... something is missing.
Hope next time you write 2min as lovers, because I really want good authors to write about them kk ^^ Hwaiting!
bluemoonluvkpop0596
#4
Chapter 30: thanks so much for writing this story it was really a pleasure to read ^^
im very happy that everyone has their happy ending and that minho and taemin are still together to enjoy their company i mean they didnt get 'together' but i believe they have developed a special bond indeed ^^ it was awesome watching how their relationship has develop and how so much as change between them :D
Touchstone
#5
Chapter 30: im positive that u could send ur msg about 'true love' to us successfully :)
it was really a beautiful story. im so glad u wrote it n also decided to share it with us all...i should've said some more wonderful things about this story as it's over, but i cant seem to find any perfect words to say here :)
it was a different story. not the stereotypical type ones. that's why i liked it the most. i recently stopped reading thr stories with s and all but i couldn't stop my addiction for stories. but it is kinda hard to find a story here which doesn't contain sth like that. in this case, ur story helped me a lot, a whole lot.
Thanks to you, again :):):)
You Are An Awesome Author, Endelle!
zmusix #6
Chapter 30: .....my heart slightly hurts though it was a good ending. I love all of it so much. I loved the silly little comments that they would say and just it was amazing. I hope after a good break that you will write something new. I will forever love this story and it being my first AFF story that I have ever read that it makes it all the more special to me. Have a wonderful day/night and I hope that you will continue to write in the future and be just as great or even better.
innocentlyevilsammi #7
Chapter 30: I loved this story ;; I'm sad it's done.
I get what you mean though, about the love thing. This was definitely a great 2min story. c:
butausagi #8
Chapter 30: You shouldn't have tagged this as 2min
AusAngel26 #9
Chapter 30: *Quiet tears* Its over..... such a awesome story, happy with the end, kinda leaves it open enough for us die hard 2min fans, I will miss this story, and will have to get back to again in the future and reread it. I want to write more at the moment, but I don't have the right words, but you know my thoughts, I have made sure to write at least something each chapter you have put up. Give yourself a break and be back fresh and new with another perfect story soonish.
kaiminIN #10
Chapter 30: Well,its completed. It was nice.the ending OK .they will be living as neighbors,,,friends. That's completely fine. I can say it was an amazing story..