Chapter 8

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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Young Do

I didn't feel like eating in the cafeteria today. I was sitting inside my moms flower shop. "What's wrong with you Young Doah you don't seem yourself." mom said. I sheugged. I wasn't feeling like myself. After seeing that picture of Ha Yeon with that guy Sungyeol made me feel, I don't know. I just didn't like it. I know that it was the same night I asked her to go for a ride with me because she was wearing the same outfit in the picture that she had on when I saw her in the lobby. And the fact that she didn't come with me and had spent time with him upset me even more. This feeling felt familiar. I felt the same way whenever Cha Eun Sung was with Kim Tan. But it couldn't be the same. I couldn't be having feelings for her.

Cha Eun Sung is the only girl I've ever loved and look how that turned out. I knew however that Ha Yeon liked me. She was always staring at me and smiling. Yeah I knew the signs. She had a crush on me. I must just be used to her staring at me adoringly so it was weird for me seeing her that close to another guy.

Yeah that's it.

I felt better now that I had a reason for why I was so worked up over the Soo Ha Yeon and Lee Sungyeol thing. "I gotta get back to school." Mom smiled at me. "Come back after school. Even if you don't want to talk. I like being able to see you sitting here."

I smiled genuinely at her. "Ok."

Things weren't back to normal with me and mom but we were getting there.

 

I rode my bike back to school feeling a little lighter than I had before. As I walked down the hall heading for my class I saw Hayeon. She was in the hallway talking to some guy I didn't know. She was smiling at him and nodding her head. He then reached out and placed his hand on her arm. I quickly walked over knocking his arm away. I put my arm around her shoulder. She looked over at me surprised.

 "C'mere. I need to talk to you." I guided her away from the boy who was frowning at me. "What did that guy want?" I asked once we were out of hearing distance.

She shrugged her shoulders. "Nuthin much. He wasn't really interested in me...he obviously just wants to get closer to my dad."

I was confused.

Why would the guy be more interested in her dad then a cutely adorable girl. I froze and since my arm was around her she stopped to looking at me puzzled. I gazed at her. Did I really think she was adorably cute?

I studied her further, her big dark eyes, that cute round face.

"Why are you staring at me like that? Your starting to creep me out." She shrugged my arm from of her and quickly walked away.

I watched her go.

 

HaYeon

 

I was sitting in the library, my usual spot whenever I had free period. I was supposed to be getting done my homework because after school I would have to go the the country club with mom too have lunch or whatever with that congressmen's wife and son. I was so not looking forward to it. But instead of doing that homework take a wild guess at what I was doing.

If u guessed thinking about Choi Young Do..

Ding ding ding you are correct.

It was so weird how he just stopped and stared at me while we were walking down the hall. Having him focused soley on me like that had me running. And the fact that the people in the hall were trying to be discreet about watching us and wispering, it was embarrassing. 

 

Two gurls walked into the livrary looking around before they came my way and sat across from me at the t

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.