Chapter 5

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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I sat inside my room doing my homework. I had nothing better to do. My parents said they were going to be late again today and to order room service. I decided though that once I finished with my homework I was going to go out to eat. I was tired of only going to school and then back here to sit in this hotel suite all alone. 

Homework finished I dressed in jean shorts and a purple tank top. I threw on my converse and grabbed my purse leaving the hotel room. I walked down the hall to the elevator and pressed the button. I hadn't decided on what I was going to eat yet. Most likely I was going to wonder around until I came to a shop that looked good. Once I was finished I would take a cab back. The elevator doors opened and I came face to face with Choi Young Do.

This was un real. I stood their without moving, debating on if I should just let the doors close and wait until the elevator came back again. I didn't think I could take being in that small space with him. I was still mad at him. As I stood their thinking about it the elevator doors closed. I breathed a sigh of releif. Crisis averted. I waited a safe amount of time before pressing the button again. When the elevator came to a stop on my floor and the doors opened for a minute I expected to see Choi Young Do's face again. But the elevator was empty. Like he would really ride the elevator up again just because he wanted to talk to me. I was pretty sure he didn't even like me. I got into the elevator and pressed the button for the lobby. I got out of the elevator and walked towards the front doors when someone stepped in front of me blocking my path. My heart rate picked up when I noticed it was Young Do. 

He waited for me.

"Where are you going?" He asked.

I wanted to tell him where and ask if he wanted to come with me. I bit my lip. But I couldn't let him think it was ok for him to act how he did earlier. It took extreme effort but I rolled my eyes and walked past him. Would he follow me? He would right? And then it wouldn't be my fault if we ended up h

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.